"Prayer"

Yo my veins ache my skin shows scars so thick with blood and hatred/though amongst all tha bullshit i rise an feel sacrid/ we in tha battle of life, in this battle i'll fight, tha outcome? now that'll be nice/i'm on tha path less traveled which means, you'll feel tha wrath of this nigga who'll laugh/ measures get hectic, in my blood i'll take baths/i've been internally stressed since tha war came/ wars here, now we could sit back and see your pain/ so many years on this planet battlin for freedom/life for granted tha feilds filled wit anger no smiles or laughter/ crawled for miles, and captured, more drama for my story life/ but no chapter, motivation got me goin after tha prize/ this here'll flatter ya eyes, ya'll all go down you'll splatter like flies/ I'm wise, keep my head to tha sky, got shit to advise/ no matter what i keep tha dead to my side (r.i.p niggas)/ i walk through blocks where drama often lies/ gun shots, mother of 4 course tha mama often cries/ fucked life is slippin away,got me trippin to say/ tha real truth on my mind im grippin to stay/ back at school i was skippin tha days, now i sit up at night as i drift an i prey/ God help me...

wasent feelin dis shit at all, liked yo other piece

Flow was here and there, but some nice context man. Concepts were nice, and you had some sick multies in there. You got alot of potential, and I'm glad I read this one compared to your other. And since I've Peep'd 2 of yours, click both the links in my siggy titled Reflection of Fate and Key to Privacy

pZ!

.............i gotz 2 agree with zainy.........this was to simple.......i wasnt feelin it at all............