Journey within my Mind
cuz I can't seem ta find
a reason for the mysteries in time
the messages come thru in rhyme
our existence so sublime

I open my eyeS & to my suprISE!
SO many LIVES!
TO many LIES!
Cuttin like KNIVES!
as Everyone DENIES!!!!!
THE PAIN!
that makes many go insane
i see the name a the game
Death 4 Greed/Money n Lust
whatever happened to
In God we Trust

(Chorus)
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
-=_==--=--_-=_=-

With-holdin wisdom from the masses
a created seperation of the classes
Confusin me with yer education
Shit, I gain more knowledge durin
Masturbation n Meditation
Intoxication n Spiritual Elevation
and Most important Copulation

I was a Buddhist a Hindu a Tibetan Monk
a Christian a Muslim even an atheist Punk
Now i'm up off my knees
prayin ta God/Goddess please
won't ya let me in on all yer mysteries
illuminate the keys of Divine thoughts seeds
an understandin of what it all means
it's so much more than what it seems.

(Chorus)
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
-=_==--=--_-=_=-

so step into anotha life & rethink yer own
were all in this together, never alone
ya gotta be yourself, not another drone
remember yer made a light not just skin n bone
and no matter what happens, Were all Goin HOME*

ta know the cosmic purpose of our birth
and what lifes worth
just Imagine Heaven, On Mother Earth

(Chorus)
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
(fading)


--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
*H.O.M.E=H.eaven O.n M.other E.arth



Thanx 4 readin.....
appreciate any feedback

peace
Souls Journey

[COLOR=royal blue]Hmmmm Not Bad,A Bit Long Tho & You Need 2 Up Ur Wordplay & Vocab. Okai... pZ... Spitzophrenic[/COLOR]

afta readin others shyt---I see what ya mean----
thanx



uppin^^^^^^^^`~~^^

peace

uppin for some more insight----

preparin 4 a battle


just open my mind
let the punches flow--

peace

thanx

"Death 4 Greed/Money n Lust
whatever happened to
In God we Trust"


Liked that alot. keep elevatin.

keep it real, your original and honest, you sound like somebody who has dealt wit alot, good shit.

keepin my Eye on spirit---Creator in All
life's dealt me it's punches---many others been through some worse shit than me though---my blessings go out to all-fightin the battle to be themselves with the cards dealt--especially when shorthanded this time around-

that which doesn't kill us only makes us stronger....or makes us go insane so we just don't care anymore---little lesson in appearances------


"Emancipate yourself from mental slavery,none but ourselves can free our minds." A Prophet--named Bob


thanx 4 ya peepin
peace

uppin 4 more feedback---

always lookin 2 improve


peace

thanx all

very nice flow dog, i really enjoyed reading it and hope you put more songs out like this one, it flowed nicely and the rhymes were dope, drop another one real soon dog holla!

nice flow, enjoyed it alot i agree wit whoever said u gotta up ur vocab, but it flows and rhymes nicely, good drop

Ill drop........Vocab was there , and wordplay was also tight

VOcab has to be said wus ILL as Bash said.............contend wus nice

sick drop

peep mine Womens Worth

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lil lengthy for my likings but whatever....

it was aight... hmmm vocab was cool...

all in all, just ya average post...

peace

movin on up-----critique it please

thanX 4 All

peace