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Old 06-26-03, 05:00 PM   #1
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who wants beef?, entering this zone with nothin to no credit/
use to be the best now just fucin wit your tenants//
the sentence structured with a flow thats unstoppable/
niggas dum in this board thats why i gotta show-a-hot-multiple.
i entered this board just to help and rescue/
wear'n nikes now i gotta be dealt to check you.
i forgot the basics, since im new here i got to stun the dopest.
the flow rocks hard like those of guns and roses/
everythin done in focus in refining the sickness/
rapbattles.com.....emceeZ is defining the illness.
i'm on a level where elevate'n would be turn'n into a god/
flow wit imagery the text is burn'n into a glock.
emcees to me are like dimes wait'n to get smoked kid/
"my text should be in italic cuz it all should be quoted"..
i left the text cause it was a easy thing leave'n.
my battles were get'n more spectators then the rodney king beat'n.
simple cause it was a mis-match like there were to bitches battle'n/
i flow about the present cause i stick to whats happen'n.
emceeZ lost his manhood once he turned into a Icon/
a symble of what lyricist want to be, with a intro of a nice flow.
whoever has a problem i hope you crap mcs know you'll be hunted/
i aint take'n over this board cause it would literally mean i run shit/

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Old 06-26-03, 05:16 PM   #2
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hmmm..not bad at all...

some parts are hard to understand but as i read it to the end...its clear...the flow doesnt fit much but for some they do....
hmmm..vocabs need to be up a bit....the content is kinda confusing but the structure is alright...

this is just my contructive critism ya kno..dont take it personally...

we all still elevatin on this site...

so yeah...drop some more
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