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Old 05-21-03, 10:01 AM   #1
LaRyan Shabaz
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Blasphemy

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This is what I dropped in this weeks R.B.T.L.
I got no-showed so the thread was locked.
I figured I'd drop it in here so I could get some comment on it.
It was rushed, and it's not the cliche "story" type topical drop, but... eh:



It's all in the pronunciation. . .
It's veiled racism that spews its case against non-annunciation/
It's mothers and daughters sharing AND sparring blows while caring for the government housing while on probation/
It's $30/hr for plumbers snaking/
While talented emcees are pushed to the brink of starvation/
It's baby gangsters trying to see things through. . . You/
And cats chatting online fronting similarly "TRU"/
It's experiencing ecstacy on Saturday night and again Sunday morning/
Well then, it's no wonder you proclaim "the preacher bores me"/
It's that same flower gone sour, saying "So what if he's forty?"/
God, does this shit floor me. . ./
"God, my parents adore me!"/
It's tough watching the shore getting beaten and eaten away by the sea/
It's that rather unholy first communion requiring but a processing fee/
If sodomy is just variation on a theme/
Why is it so much worse than adultery?/
The shattering of vested dreams/
It seems sports teams have sky-pointing heroes/
Exceling at childrens games annoints these zeroes?/
Let's ourselves zero in on their "united way" commercial image. . ./
After the after-party rape and pillage sets ire in the village, man. . ./
They're up in smoke quicker than Nate Newton's van/
Crush your smiley Chunky soup can, please try to act like an honest man/
Rather than enacting a pious media plan lacking the legs or foundation on which to stand/
Some say it's a fall from divinity, general apathy towards the holy trinity/
The label cast by the masses for "messin" with HE/
All I know is that in this secularized circularized world, it surrounds me/

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Old 05-21-03, 11:43 AM   #2
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thought it was aight, could use some work on flow etc..but overall it was a decent drop
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Old 05-21-03, 02:31 PM   #3
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decent drop man....flo was there hit mine up
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Old 05-21-03, 05:30 PM   #4
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Yeah this drop lacked vocab
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Old 05-22-03, 05:26 PM   #5
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lol. Upping.
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Old 05-28-03, 07:30 AM   #6
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Up.
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Old 05-30-03, 12:41 PM   #7
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Giving this one final mid-day up.
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