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Blasphemy
IP: 4577 CD9A
This is what I dropped in this weeks R.B.T.L.
I got no-showed so the thread was locked. I figured I'd drop it in here so I could get some comment on it. It was rushed, and it's not the cliche "story" type topical drop, but... eh: It's all in the pronunciation. . . It's veiled racism that spews its case against non-annunciation/ It's mothers and daughters sharing AND sparring blows while caring for the government housing while on probation/ It's $30/hr for plumbers snaking/ While talented emcees are pushed to the brink of starvation/ It's baby gangsters trying to see things through. . . You/ And cats chatting online fronting similarly "TRU"/ It's experiencing ecstacy on Saturday night and again Sunday morning/ Well then, it's no wonder you proclaim "the preacher bores me"/ It's that same flower gone sour, saying "So what if he's forty?"/ God, does this shit floor me. . ./ "God, my parents adore me!"/ It's tough watching the shore getting beaten and eaten away by the sea/ It's that rather unholy first communion requiring but a processing fee/ If sodomy is just variation on a theme/ Why is it so much worse than adultery?/ The shattering of vested dreams/ It seems sports teams have sky-pointing heroes/ Exceling at childrens games annoints these zeroes?/ Let's ourselves zero in on their "united way" commercial image. . ./ After the after-party rape and pillage sets ire in the village, man. . ./ They're up in smoke quicker than Nate Newton's van/ Crush your smiley Chunky soup can, please try to act like an honest man/ Rather than enacting a pious media plan lacking the legs or foundation on which to stand/ Some say it's a fall from divinity, general apathy towards the holy trinity/ The label cast by the masses for "messin" with HE/ All I know is that in this secularized circularized world, it surrounds me/ Fin. |
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IP: 7926 A723
thought it was aight, could use some work on flow etc..but overall it was a decent drop
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IP: 5503 87F8
decent drop man....flo was there hit mine up
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BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
Yeah this drop lacked vocab
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IP: C1DA C961
lol. Upping.
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IP: C1DA C961
Up.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Giving this one final mid-day up.
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