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Writers Block Feat. Phrantik
IP: 7C2C F124
Im sittin with pen brandished,
tryna release some written anguish But it seems my pens bled dry, and each of my thoughts have vanished Its the worst feeling, i cant jot what i wnt to say down so im forced to take out my mood Swings at the local Playground searching for inspiration, tryna think outside the box wishing someone would give me directions on how to escape from Writers Block Mind tied in knots, but the lines wont combine or connect i cant express how im feeling, remain trapped in a Vortex staring at a blank page, not knowing where to start from considering climbing a building, and waiting for The Jump Off only hope is to get caught by a mat of many great thoughts but instead I crash down on many bricks and return to writers block lost like pianos there are no keys so ill reamin in this dead lock yelling for help, somebody please til my mouth can no longer talk built up with rage from this disease my arteries all are blocked, my heart flows dry and everyones shocked im the first child to die on writers block. |
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IP: 3FF9 C72A
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
im the first child to die on writers block...excellent ohhh..im likign it...but eh...wheres phrantik?...i wont comment till phrantiks is up so i dont have to create another post in here ok. ![]() |
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^WE's Leader^...Dope Huh?
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IP: A5C6 0CD7
yea...it was good...more in a poetic form than an open mic though...nice though...i liked it
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IP: 7C2C F124
Atetrack, Phrantiks verse is in there - it looks like one verse, but its actually 2 joined together, your not supposed to know where it joins, that shows we worked well together, lol
Its just our style i guess, thanks for the feedback though! |
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IP: 798E 1507
yo the shit was tight reminded me of tupacs the case of the stolen mic
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Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
haha. good job on your half vortex. really nice.
uppin.
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IP: 9236 FEDE
SHITS NICE
LIKED IT PEEP MINE |
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IP: DDA6 0DCF
sweet-----been there.....even got visuals
actually a good remedy for writers block---just write aboutthat , till the flow comes back-----thanx check out my first open mic-would appreciate your critique Mystical Minstrel http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386 peace-------- good collab.... |
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IP: 1E7F 0E93
^ No doubt man, i'll hit that up tommorow if not tonight. .
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Sand
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IP: F769 24D3
Very nicely done
i think i know where you each cut off... lol came together very nicely. hoping to collab or see some of your collabs in the phuture...heh
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IP: 1E7F 0E93
^ No doubt Creation, your in P3, right?
Get at me sometime.... |
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IP: B368 E888
nice piece,keep postin
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IP: 1E7F 0E93
^ I Intend to, lol.
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Guest
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IP: 55BB C0BD
i hate fuckn writers block haha nice verse tho and yea i didnt even notice where u stopped and he started or he stopped u started or whatever lol. peace
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IP: 1B41 5B79
shit was tight, dope thing was we can all relate to wat yo sayin,,, nice shit uppin
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