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Old 05-27-03, 02:12 PM   #1
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Writers Block Feat. Phrantik

IP: 7C2C F124

Im sittin with pen brandished,
tryna release some written anguish
But it seems my pens bled dry,
and each of my thoughts have vanished
Its the worst feeling,
i cant jot what i wnt to say down
so im forced to take out my mood Swings
at the local Playground
searching for inspiration,
tryna think outside the box
wishing someone would give me directions
on how to escape from Writers Block
Mind tied in knots,
but the lines wont combine or connect
i cant express how im feeling,
remain trapped in a Vortex
staring at a blank page,
not knowing where to start from
considering climbing a building,
and waiting for The Jump Off
only hope is to get caught
by a mat of many great thoughts
but instead I crash down on many bricks
and return to writers block
lost like pianos there are no keys
so ill reamin in this dead lock
yelling for help, somebody please
til my mouth can no longer talk
built up with rage from this disease
my arteries all are blocked,
my heart flows dry
and everyones shocked
im the first child to die
on writers block.
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Old 05-27-03, 03:12 PM   #2
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
im the first child to die on writers block...excellent ohhh..im likign it...but eh...wheres phrantik?...i wont comment till phrantiks is up so i dont have to create another post in here ok. ...liking it lots so far...
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Old 05-27-03, 03:16 PM   #3
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yea...it was good...more in a poetic form than an open mic though...nice though...i liked it
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Old 05-27-03, 03:26 PM   #4
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Atetrack, Phrantiks verse is in there - it looks like one verse, but its actually 2 joined together, your not supposed to know where it joins, that shows we worked well together, lol

Its just our style i guess, thanks for the feedback though!
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Old 05-27-03, 03:35 PM   #5
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yo the shit was tight reminded me of tupacs the case of the stolen mic
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Old 05-27-03, 05:53 PM   #6
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haha. good job on your half vortex. really nice.
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Old 05-27-03, 05:55 PM   #7
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SHITS NICE
LIKED IT

PEEP MINE
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Old 05-27-03, 06:01 PM   #8
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sweet-----been there.....even got visuals

actually a good remedy for writers block---just write aboutthat ,
till the flow comes back-----thanx

check out my first open mic-would appreciate your critique

Mystical Minstrel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386

peace--------

good collab....
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Old 05-27-03, 06:36 PM   #9
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^ No doubt man, i'll hit that up tommorow if not tonight. .
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Old 05-27-03, 06:37 PM   #10
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Very nicely done
i think i know where
you each cut off...
lol
came together very
nicely. hoping to
collab or see some
of your collabs in the



phuture...heh
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Old 05-27-03, 07:57 PM   #11
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^ No doubt Creation, your in P3, right?
Get at me sometime....
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Old 05-27-03, 08:47 PM   #12
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nice piece,keep postin
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Old 05-27-03, 09:11 PM   #13
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^ I Intend to, lol.
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Old 05-27-03, 11:03 PM   #14
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i hate fuckn writers block haha nice verse tho and yea i didnt even notice where u stopped and he started or he stopped u started or whatever lol. peace
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Old 05-27-03, 11:10 PM   #15
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shit was tight, dope thing was we can all relate to wat yo sayin,,, nice shit uppin
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