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Old 05-31-03, 11:57 AM   #1
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Ender (1-1) vs. TREACH P (1-1)

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Old 06-01-03, 05:21 PM   #2
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Checking in... Not much time left, so let's hope TREACH P shows... ..................... ...........
 
Old 06-01-03, 05:31 PM   #3
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eeewww.... checkins by monday? Something changed........................................... .. 1234567
 
Old 06-02-03, 03:20 AM   #4
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Old 06-03-03, 02:34 AM   #5
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Will drop wendsday aussie time (i think that tuesday yoursss)
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Old 06-03-03, 07:27 PM   #6
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You ever sit in the darkness
silent, eerie, endless blindness?
Alone at night, empty hallow
so much pain, too much to swallow?
cuz if you do then you're like me
a waste in face of reality
it's been so long how to get out?
What's got me here is my doubts
the fear of not being enough
scared i'm not up to snuff
i'm dyin see, over a course of time
struggling just to write a rhyme...
so listen just don't ask me why
it is that tonight i'm gonna die.
it's painful enough to think about it
but i just can't live up to this shit
so i guess this is how i say goodbye
with a knife and gun i send my spirit to fly

sorry didn't have any time to prepare. school almost out, finals, that type of shit. it's not much but it's what i got...
 
Old 06-04-03, 02:46 AM   #7
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Some cats may think this strolls from the topic a bit but it depends on what your opinion is on the topic

Meet bill a 45-year-old redneck whop refuses to move forward.


Bill was a no good alcoholic, all he’d ever do was get drunk and beat his wife,
Although he wouldn’t accept it he’d ruined his own life,
Boring people with his stories of “Nam” and how he’d killed four commies with his knife,
Bill was a racist, even though times were moving forward he refused to face- it,
Bill wasn’t exactly a member of the K.K.K but he still believed in what they were saying,
When he was beating up his wife, he pretended it was her fault the gas bills he was paying,
One day in his drunkenness after beating up his wife bill decided he would go for a drive,
He went through an isolated road hit a poll and was pinned down but was still alive,
Bill was only just alive but his hate forced him to survive,
Bill didn’t no who he hated the most god, black people, his wife or the fact that he ran into that post,
Many people drove past including his wife but one man drove back,
But bill didn’t accept it because the fact that he was black,
Bill said: I don’t need your help ni*ger
The black man looked at him and began to snigger,
He said you and your redneck culture Is painfully dying,
The fact that he refused to move forward had the black man crying,
Each day the black man came back but his help was refused,
His (bills) pain was more sudden like the wife’s he had abused,
The next day the cops found Bill Strickling deceased,
He went to hell because his hatred had only increased


SAame i turned on my computer and suddenly realised they were due any way vot4e two verses with complete differant ideas
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Old 06-04-03, 03:14 AM   #8
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Nice verse by both emcees, but i rekon TREACH took this one, his shit was alot more flow betta wordplay alot more creative and came together better aswell, But nice verses by both guyz
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Old 06-04-03, 05:43 AM   #9
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Thanks uppin for some votes
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Old 06-04-03, 05:54 AM   #10
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Yeah both verses were nice...Ender's was straight, good flow and nice concept, short but sweet...6.5/10...
Treach's was nice, also a nice concept, flowed well, anotehr good concept, told a nice story...7/10....

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Old 06-04-03, 04:40 PM   #11
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my vote goes to Treach cuz he actually told a story ya know it was deep it had a meaning. both flows were kinda screwed up a little but treach's was just better overall


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Old 06-05-03, 02:20 PM   #12
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by the way mad man the girl that writes this shit wants out. she feels like she's not good enough/has no talent, etc. Which perhaps to some extent is true. Unless you guys want to try to get her to stay first, can ya sign her out from week 3? Since I didn't find a sign-out thread, I'm just posting here...
 
Old 06-05-03, 02:23 PM   #13
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and also if any of you got a spare second, could ya check out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53620 ? It was my alternate against TREACH before this girl came up with something at the last minute... Sorry for freepostin, would just like some comments on this...
 
 


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