LADIES AND GENTLEMEN/
I''LL RIP A NIGGA''S LIGAMENTS/
SEND EM BACK TO THEY VILLAGES IF THEY EVER DEALIN WITH IMAGES/
SO FUCK SCRIMAGES/
THIS IS FULL SCALE/
SPITTIN FLAMES THAT''LL ROAST HELL/
LYRICAL FINGERNAILS THAT SCRATCH BRAINCELLS WHEN I EXHALE/
EVEN THE BEST FAIL/
COMPETITION JUST FALL INTO SUBMISSION/
I''M SPITTIN ANY LYRIC WITHIN MY DIMENSION/
YOU FISHIN FOR WACKNESS AND MIGHT EXPECT TO FIND IT/
BUT ITS USELESS CUZ EVERY DOPE RHYME GOT BETTER LINES BEHIND IT/
FUCK SPITTIN, I EXPECTORATE/
IM A BOMB WAITIN TO DETONATE/
I ELEVATE LYRICS AND HAVE RAPPERS RESUBMITTIN THEY RESUMES/
I FEEL A JEWEL WITH SYLLABLES/
AND INVADE YA PHYSICAL WITH THE LYRICALS/
THAT BUST LIKE EJACULATIN GENITALS AROUSED BY A VAGINAS CHEMICALS/
I''M A SENTINEL/
WITH MASSIVE STRENGTH/
RIPPIN UP FLOWS SICK ENOUGH TO RAISE YA TEMP TO A HUNDRED AND FIFTEEN POINT SIX/
I''M QUICK TO FLIP VERSES THAT GO BEYOND RESPECTABLE/
I''M IRREPRESSIBLE/
HANGIN EMCEES BY THEY TESTICLES/
AND THROWIN EM IN TRASH RECEPTACLES/
SHININ WITH LIGHT THAT''LL CRACK SPECTACLES/
IT''S EVIDENT I REPRESENT EVERYTHING DETESTABLE/
I HAVE EMCEES BARELY BREATHIN/
FATIGUIN FOR NO REASON TO THE POINT WHERE THEY CREWS COMMIT TREASON/
LEAVIN QUICKER THAN THE HUMAN PENIS CAN EMIT CEMEN WHILE WET DREAMIN/
SO FUCK BEING HUNGRY FOR THE MIC, I''M MORE LIKE FEENIN/
ANY NIGGA WHO RECOGNIZE CAN SURELY TESTIFY IT'S REAL EASY
TO GRIMREEFER IT''S MOTHER FUCKING HUNTING SEASON

this was pretty nice man. i really liked it. was able to catch the flow pretty good. if i could tell you to change somethin it would be the caps. other than that...it was a good verse. i really liked this part right here..."THIS IS FULL SCALE/
SPITTIN FLAMES THAT''LL ROAST HELL/
LYRICAL FINGERNAILS THAT SCRATCH BRAINCELLS WHEN I EXHALE/
EVEN THE BEST FAIL/" that was nice. keep spittin man

i'll admit,,,,,u've improved by heaps........the vocab was good,
the flow was a bit off..........

blah blahblah blahblah blahblah blahblah blahblah blah
blah blahblah blahblah blah/////some of ur liens were too small

next time spit on a topic...........

that was str8. some of your lines were garbage. seems liek you didnt take enuf time with this 1 but i can tell u can drop something nice if u take time. ill give it a 7.5/10 pzz~