rules

15 lines max

no dick ridn

no crew

no hate

no no no HATE

get my drift?

go for it

oh yea check in.............................................
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yoo i got boottted...my badd i'm on shitty ass aol and when i get booted it takes like 10 min's.....anyways here it is

here it comes, son get ready-ya not one to best me-culdn't even get on a cut-fuckin a machete...
watch as i present, the rest is butta-ya dun't got the balls to speak over me-so stop reppin thunder...(he's from trenton)(trenton thunder is triple a baseball team).....
i'll stretch this fucker, and hit em with an axe-i'm sinnin at a max-they say ya kinda nice-but my decision is ya wack...
ya needa be wishin fo life, cuz death's been granted-where's ya killa instinct-i'm breakin necks at random...
ya can't fathom, the reason ya blow-not defeatin the quotes-everythin outside-is percievingly slow...
let's cut the bullshit, cuz i aint doggin-trained with force and-only beef ya'll see-is steak on the foreman...
even worse, i'm splatter ya dome-ya culd be battery prone-and not provide enuff energy-to spark a light in ya home...
wise guys get thrown, punches are blisterin-1 close ya legs-ya smell like lunch with a fisherman...
bitch and it reeks, where's the lysol-like a werewolf eatin a halls-ya suck even more at nightfall...
i apply more, and'll put ya record to the ground-with plenty of pounds-ya skills like ya lifesavings-only a penny is found...
use the henny and dround, ya over hopes-think ya'll crush me-i dun't get to hearts-with darts-i use broken bones...
my flows expose, ya got jumped stat-hide the blunt wraps-cuz ya bein high's like comparin gary oldman to a hunchback...
trust that, and take the loss cuzzin-befo i come to new jeru with a time card-and leave ya jaw punched in....

peace...one

wtf?...cmon now just cuz i got booted u bounced..and didn't even come back on?...ya betta have this shit up tomorrow we hsulda set a due date...1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51768 do u s a favour and vote here after that guy ur playing put his lines down il vote

uh thats 20 lines.......but ok il match...................



yo

dude, im bout to leave u wit more black holes n red spaces like im board, dont beleive, scroll up then check-urs//
rip u apart wit this verbal assault on thing remaing CONSTANT is his losing records//
my words are textured, to fade mc's who think they can win battles wit play-ted lines//(plated)
my verse quickly becomes a stomach churning potrait like i was spittin ab-subtract designs//(abstract)
its like a names a curse for this clown, sought out a battle and soon as he was hired//
left him right back searchin for new personnel, cuz his ass 'jus got fired'!//lol(see profile)

ima beat u wit boxin prowless, like i was packagin this plant and splittin his shute//
like u made a wrong turn headin down south, only thing left for u to do is up-root//
ya punches splash-down not extendin to far like u shootin a pee-shooter//
well please move ur, shittin on my words bein processed by voter like a com-pooter!//lol
lets see u started in early 2002 with hopes a bright future...//
2-7? looks like a dreams jus reopen wounds like a loose suchure//

this is too easy..i could spit breezy on this clown he'll still end up wind-scarred//
these lyrics fill u up wit 18 clean holes all over u, while i still finish under par..//(18 line verse)
for you..victorys far..but losing absolute got u 'GONE' off my words like its 150 proof//
try to follow my bars, end up wit ya fasted thoughts scattered like ur runnin-eluff//(all over tha place)

ur post looks foolish, ur con-stance makes as much sense as a criminal posing//
jus lyrically bitch-smacked u...k? 9 more words following me dumbfounded a parked cars inclosing.......//




*CRACK!!!......dog... u hit tha bumber head-on........
this bitches skull ends up fractured when he fucks wit 'gone'*



lol damn aol kicked me off too

im dropin a honest vote when i say "gone" took this, he did it with wordplay, other guy came out swingin and i was impressed. 1 jus won it with word play and experience. vote =1



(u forgot to poll vote in my battle)

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1 won this one just tighter smiple as that not my style but it was cool peace .................................................. ...........

i did 13 lines dawg..so wut is this 20 shit?....are bars are prettymuch the same length...except fo sum of u'rs..but still count em down..lines...i shulda made it more obvious wut my bars were....but oh well explain the votes....uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnmy comps slow as fuckkkkkkkkk on the truthhhhhhn.....uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn

This Was An aight Battle......
Con Had Sum Good punches And Flow But It Could Have Been better structured...
Gone, You Had Sum Good punches But I Think Your Wordplay Won It For You...
Good Battle By Both......

Vote - 1-N-Gone


I Dunno If It Will Let Me Poll Vote Coz The System Is Fucked......
And I Aint On AOL.

guess i'mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm upppinnnnn...1

yo I will hit this shit if someone goes to my battle and make a honest vote then I will do tha same at your battle.....and thats a deal...!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52256