Im sittin in my room thinkin lookin to the sky/

Wondering if your mother will let me pass by/

My soul's out of control my world upside down in a black hole/

Cause you aint here, your mother dont care, I'm four years older/

Her heart grows colder and words get BOLDER every minute/

Feels like I'm alone in my heart and I'm the only one in it/

Pain infinite this cant be life, Yo she's my future wife how you gonna go and cause this strife/

C'mon you know my love is strong, I even went and tattooed her name on my arm/

I love you Erica no more obstacles I wanna be tanning with you somewhere tropical/

Away from misery and pain but right now my feelings are the victim of a serial killer they're slain/

From the main vein to my left aeorta, I miss you oh so much my hearts not working its out of order/

Gimme some water I'm breakin out sweats, Losing my breath, This is what love feels like broken a sudden death/

In my room here all alone, Watchin my bureau there lays my cellular phone/

Waiting for the illuminated light to blink, Even bringing it with me when I wash my hands in the sink/

I'm dedicated to you and I miss you, And I dont want your mother to be the judge in this case for me to dismiss you/

She says you're too young you're not ready for love, But she dont know love only the lord knows up above/

How do you split two souls apart, rip their heart and make them re-start/

New relationships dont work if you're still involved in the past/

And I sit and ask myself why I always end up last/

In the game of affection its seems my hearts in a infection, dissection of my happiness/

Forsaken by God from love, Forsaken by the Devil for pain, You wonder what drives a man to kill, makes him insane?/

Parents of another fuck with your brain and world/

I still dont understand why I can't see my girl/

I jus wanna come over, Can I come over, hold her tell that I care, Without you intervening over there,

With a cold stare in your eye making my sweetheart cry to the point shes contemplating suicide/

You dont give her freedom and a smile, You'd rather piss her off gives you pleasure for a while,/

Well I'm gonna tear down ya house and capture her for my taking/

Cause I've got the super glue for this heart you are breaking, And I'm gonna fix it and make it work/

Keep your hatin ways to yourself you fuckin jerk/

We love each other like Sally met Harry/

I got that backwards but you wont be invited when we marry/

Wont be there when the kids are born/

I'm gonna be the reason why your family's torn/

You tried to fuck with me and make me go to my house never come back/

Well my hearts a million times stronger than that...your daughter loves the mack/

Payback is what you get and this aint no eminem story but in the end the audience will applaud me/

Laughing when you die and dancing at your wake/

Hope you burn in hell for this terrible mistake/

Who the hell are you for a relationship to break/

Did I give you permission to drop my heart rip the relationship and take my girl, my world who I breathe for/

Open the doors like a Gentleman try and fuck up what she has in store/

Go see another guy that'll ice her in the store, motherfuckers gon try and use her for pussy, Your daughter aint no whore/

What she needs is me in her life long dream/

Cause we are unseperable cant break up this team/

I love you I love you I love you I love you/

God answer my prayers so I can at least hug you/

I miss you darling I been gone for a while/

But without you when I die I wont be seen with a smile/

So Lord take my life now cause I can't live/

My attitude no longer positive its negative/

And I dont care whether heaven or hell/

Cause now a relationships story is closed would never tell/

If we were Mr and Mrs Right like them story tales/

But now my love is like the titanic, crashed when set sails/

My body's dying now I'm clammy and pail/

Ants eating me with maggots through my eyes, looking like Jason Voorhies Am I dead?/

Who cares, not even her mother if this flow she read/

Guess its getting kinda late now lay my head in bed/

Nervous of whats to come tommorrow whats ahead/

Hopefully I see her and hopefully god's hope and prayer/

That when I look to my left shes by my side holdin my hand right there/

DAMN THIS IS THA LONGEST SHIT I EVA READ SINCE I CAME TO RB..........WOW!!!!!!!!!...

AND YEs it wus worth it next time dawg make it shorter...lol

nice contend alot of emotions put in this piece nice drop

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Sorry man lotta emotions here..im feelin this way right now man....im fucked up..tears and shit

Ill piece.......Deep shit man.....I was feelin it.........Long but worth reading........U expressed ur feelings in this piece....Nice Tittle and concept..........Checkout ur Pms.......I send u a message

yeh yeh nice man...(im telling everyone this) but im expectin my kid within a week so i probs will relate to those emotions nice stuff..but ur shit pisses me off the way u leave spaces lol.....nice worth da read

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thanx uppin...I jus do the spaces so its easier to read

deep shit dawg. great peice. a little lengthy but it is consistantly good. open mics are always better then there is so much emotion

thanx still uppin

this was def. ill, madd deep, yo, btw welcome to bre.1

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yea like everyone else said this has got alotta emtions in it....really long def...at times i thought it was kinda lame basic love lines shit like that.....but i can feel where your coming from to an extent cause i don't know your whole story but yea

dope shit dawg..liked the new flow style, the vocab was blazin' too, the feelins felt real as fuck!

it was nice yo.. mad deep emotional piece.. I feel for-ya dawg..
keep your composure tho, or go kill the girls parents.. lol.. nah, I'm jus play'n... 1

I liked this

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thanx for the replies...upp if you wish..