15 line max

due in 1h 30min... from now..

normal voting rules, y'all know them...
all votes must be explained..

holla...

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aight, this
should tight dogs
i'll vote on this when its
done, but can you vote
on my battle against QB snyper
in return, thanks
Peace

ill edit this into a vote when ya'll finish but could you hit my battle up with ace of spades while you waitin?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54058

this kid "strangles" "bombs"?.. in other words he "chokes" on "tracks".//
like a "rope-hold" on rap, "lay'n on a bee-hive's" the only time he's "down-with-wax".//
if he is "mainstream" he'll be six feet "underground" when I'm thru with his ass.//
I'm fluent in wrath, rather, my spit's fluid infected, leave this "skid's"skin"rashed".//
my candescent style shinin' on dis bomb the only way ta set-em off, he's a dud.//
put this DAWG on a leash now he's my BITCH, I'm a make him SIT.//
ya can't STAND to ya master, catch a back hand even faster.//
workin' as an "EZ-WRAP" manufacturer this kid couldn't "TEST-A-RAPPER".//
I'm on the streets like "Outdoor-OFF" the way I make this mosqito "BUG-OUT".// outdoor-off is a bug-spray
in tha "dug-out" like you the next in the "batt'in'"(battlin') line-up.//
my punches in str8 "1 liners" your's "take up the whole verse", that's quite tha "wind-up".//
musta-been high-on some krazy shit to ever hit my call-out an' sign-up.//
well, that's time up, even if you not done it don't matter, 'cause you know I've won.//

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better hurry dawg.... it's already 3.. but I'll give u some more time since u actually in front-lines

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you the one with the gun?...yea i heard that before/
fuck with bomb & you'll explode, who's really insane?...you dont want no more/
i guess you forgot the "r" off your crew name, your just familiar/
you didnt even put no crew or dick riding vote, i guess this battle's a failure/
your crew is assed out, just bend over & take it in the butt/
im winning this battle, looks at his audios..sorry for telling you because you already know too much/
damn my vision is better than your record, that shit is a laughter/
just think he's from toronto & doesnt know how to spell rap-tor/
this must be a playground because all your punches are played/
just take a look under your name, dont you know festivities means gay?/
okay lets say you insane, i had you brain-stormed for hours/
your rhymes stink, im glad that line above left you in the shower/
i just took 1 more look at your audio's, those shits are written, your not a vet./
dont blink edit your profile & make you soundclick page a hyper-link..i got you beat.."WHAT DID YOU EXPECT?"/-(his audio name)

lol... my audio name isn't what'd you expect... that's the name of one of the songs on the page.. dumb ass.. that and festivities doesn't mean gay...

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i said i would vote, damn good battlei under-estimated bomb as much shiet as he talk but he threw in personals & punches
good opener & blunt was good to, good punches but quoted the wrong places..you fell off a lil ifter the 5th line & picked it back up but bomb flow was better
vote-bomb but it was a very close battle

QB voted for bomb Wat a fuckin surprise

those 2 mite not b no official click but qb shudn't hav been allowed 2 vote.


cant vote cos i'm fam but yo blunt, u did ur thang dogg

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2 Tyma AKA Boy wonder

festivities means gaiety as known as gay
and your audio name is as known as title so dont go and say shit trying to shift votes

whatever.. that's bullshit 'cause half those personals made no sense or were not even personals.... dick ryder..

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dick ryda?
son i just think his personals & punches was better & more creative..
lemme just quote


you should learn to stick to your opponent with disses, you were too damn random

how was that a good ending.. it didn't flow, and it made no sense 'cause that isn't my audio name.. and half those punches you're saying are good are played or elementary as fuck..

played being gay jokes, 'cause honestly gay jokes are wearing very thin, everyone uses them, it's not creative at all..
and elementary for this "this must be a playground because all your punches are played/"... and you said it was good.. even the festivitie part which again makes no fuckin' sense.. 'cause it doesn't mean gay.. it's a joyous feast, or gathering.. it doesn't mean homosexual or strictly "happy"..

and that vision-record punch.. I agree that was good.. but the raptor one at the end was wack as fuck 'cause I can spell raptor.. so it was just a weak ass personal

that's my break down of his piece..

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i notice you edit everything you say, you master/backhand line didnt even make sense
that wasnt wordplay, it wasn't even a punch
you too basic and you quote bull shit
just shut thee hell up & let the voting continue