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Unforgiven & Unforgotten Peep this shit and drop your opinion
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This goes 2 Doug and Annete for all the turmoil you've caused me.
This is my way of gettin back @ U bitches. |
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Don't ever forget I know what u did/
Though I was just a snot nosed kid// Doug U would go out get drunk and hit a chick/ Your not worthy 2 B a man so cough up you dick// And Annete don't think your gettin off EZ/ I remember the games, you so fuckin sleazy// So what do U 2 bitches fucking have to say?/ O that's right U got cought and ran away// What's wrong doug? not man enough 2 stay?/ And Annete U got lucky and moved away// I couldn't forgive either of U if I tried/ U'll still B unforgiven even after I died// <- Fingaz -> |
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that was tight,short but it pieced together weel, it rhymed good,it was over all good,nice piece keep postin.
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thx Dogg this is reffering to shit I grew up dealin with I just wish I hadn't seen it but without it I prolly wouldn't MC. But the shit I'm postin as a topical iz all real
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Tampons are expensive
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damn....i feel all the anger comin out....the rhymes are written in such a way that they did too much shit that it would stay unforgiven....i could break this down but im at work so ill do it later.....i like how the way it was written short but damn lot of emotions...ill edit this later..but props...much respect...
p.s. thanks man for the feedback on my poem... i really do appreciate it a lot...check ya pm later..peace
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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IP: 3B20 6C52
aight thanx keep writin and keep the breed goin
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-Merk Squad-
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Simple Words but i felt the message
Keep Elevatin^^^ -one love- |
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aight thx
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