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Old 06-05-03, 07:41 PM   #1
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eyes wide shut but still thrusted into the light
the spectrum of this rainbow has turned in to black and white//
The masked might of the titans within
have replaced their former forms of ingorance with ones of tough skin//
to sin and take the hits of a wordly opposition
leaves me here blistered in a collapsing position//
If this transmission should reach the main land
may we join hands and pray that these are not the last sands//
within the hour glass of time, like so many broken rhymes
i find my self depleted by what i expected to always shine//
This benine sort of existance leaves me wishing i would haved missed this
leaves me wishing that this one kiss would not be a hit or miss// I dismiss the lies and stand alone ready and willing
I will not leave this hollow ground untill this truth starts spilling
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ive bursted, over ripend by the pide pipers pipein
ive been sniped down but im the one who claims to be sniping// out in the open my mopein has transduced this illusion
to one that wouldnt make sense if their was no such thing as confusion// ive been battered and bruised when no one could hear me scream
when cold sweat was met with mirror of a bad dream// the inseam of my soul lays in taters
split up by questions of nonsense where nothing ever seems to matter//
this puss splatters infected with a heart thats so rejected
if made of metal not even with a magnet would it be detected
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Old 06-05-03, 08:22 PM   #2
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yo if you peep my stuff and give me some detailed comments I'll be sure to do the same for yours... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53620
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Old 06-05-03, 08:23 PM   #3
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This benine sort of existance leaves me wishing i would haved missed this
leaves me wishing that this one kiss would not be a hit or miss// I dismiss the lies and stand alone ready and willing
I will not leave this hollow ground untill this truth starts spilling

Decent multies, Was feelin it...keep spittin
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Old 06-05-03, 08:28 PM   #4
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ender your a disgrace to that name
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Old 06-05-03, 08:53 PM   #5
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why thank you
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Old 06-06-03, 04:12 AM   #6
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word to your mom
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