i aint trying to be discriminent-but rappers couldnt amount to me if they bite what i write in incriments-NONCENTZ INCRIMINENT with a skill indiginous-deliverence with baligerence-you'd think i had dandruff being surrounded by all these flakes in the buissness-

a binary linguis-let words-take meaning like verbs- the react to an action, you in trouble- deliver punchlines so viscious in battles contenders either surrender or ask for stunt doubles-

i serve a pargraph of sentences like i served a bid-rip m.c.'s ass holes behind bars like inmates did-except metaphorically lietarally your cd was only hot if i listened to the adlibs-

i'll be the illset alive even after i died-the artist your scientific raps try to clone,but end up looking identically gay like MOBY and JAMORQUIE-

this kids spits monoxide- flows that recreate NOAH'S ARK-you wouldnt fill space between lines if you was double parked-NONCENTZ from the WARLORDS sparked-embarked-with so many hyms on my mind my hair line develop stretch marks-

part shwartenaeger on a mic path for termination-got nigguz counting down my release date like probation-

my mind is squirrel with a complex... cause im going nuts-on mics rappers buck alot but in life dont spit hot.... murder me!???? that's like taking body shots from a beer mug between "A" cups-

it takes me ten million ways to die and im still godly-36 bars is like 36 pressure points periods to sentences that verbally flatline your body-

a cross between herohetoe with ego of van diesel-a LANCER of flow spit 8 like an EVO-you aint racen against time or my rhymes mijo-

2 sides to the humain brain and insain mine mind a monstrosity-murder animosity in more stages then pages for the icluid and odyssey-

get charged with no energizer-use rappers as an apitizer-and flatten them like oprah on a tummysizer-
flip scripts in capitol meaning twist caps, wigs, skullies, and visors- the cd parentol advisor-warning i see more BUSCH then ANHEISER-

ripping haters on cross faders-the slayer-you couldnt spit hot if you gave head to flamers-

no era-when i inflict terra-on opposions whom oppose-make periods come out they nose-with lines this dope.
shit on the world...that's how i dump on my foes-

Dope SPit
Didnt like the first line but good drop
Yo

yo, the first line wad ill, second line was ill, 3rd line... damn all of it.. the wordplay and vocab were as always "WORD-PERFECT" lol.. content was standard to most your spits.. had some ill ass multies near the middle to the end as well.. over all it wasn't your best.. but it was ill no-doubt..

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this kis spits flows that recreate NOAH'S ARK-this kid wouldnt fill space between lines if he was double parked-NONCENTZ from the WARLORDS with so many hyms on my mind my hair line develop stretch marks-
^^^^^That was my favorite Part.....Ur wordplay was Madd sick...........Tha whole Drop was WORD-PERFECT........Ill shit Man...Keep spitting Fire

I agree with them other niggas, the wordplay and multi's on were on point dunny... the only thing, the lines should be more defined. Feel me? To me, it makes shit easier to read, and understand for other cats. Otherwise, it's a hot spit kid. Mad ups for ya... HOLLA.

UPPIN THANKS AND IF YOU OFFER CRITIQUES TO HELP ME ELIVATE SHOW EXAMPLES I NEED THAT HELP

uppin

truly...that's very dope and i felt it all. Sorry i can't help you man cuz you dat much higher. overall luved the piece
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uppin and dont say you not at my level i read your stuff and liked it