No, dad don't think im gonna take any more of your shit and hittin and beatin' up mum//
Don't think i won't fight back, you thought i was just "forget" all the shit you've done//
I'm sick of you and mum always fighting and you running away//
I'm sick of you not going to work to support us, and just get pissed all day//
I'm not gonna put up with mum always being battered and bruised when ever your home//
This ain't your house im taking over the throne//
I don't respect you dad and now its your turn to feel the sadness and pain//
So i put tha nine to that bastards head, pulled the trigger, leaving the mutha fucka, dead not movin', the monster has been slain//
But now i got a new dad who treats me and mum right//
He loves us both, and comes home with money to support us, now we're a "real" family, real tight//

Jus' some shit off tha top of my head^^^^^

Uppin for some opinions
Peace

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yo i feel u man i got a similar situation, but keep ya head up, jus use it to get stronger, ull never need ne1 ur whole life trust me...

yo i gone throu the same thing! except i shot him before he shot me

I thought that was real tight, keep writing =)

Same situation her cept we left my dad she got a new man and now he tries 2 beat me but we scrap allot and he can't controll me like when I was young

use this to get stronger stay up nice poem.........

yo thnx 4 tha replies.... every1 in my situation, keep ya head up.....cause live iz a gift so liv it up ya feel???
Peace ^^^Uppin' for replies