I gasp for breath hoping it doesn't turn out that way it hasnt yet
but we cant forget the dreadful prom the start of all of this shit
the alpha to all of this turned me to a balling kid so i just hold her
in the backseat i let my warmest tears soak the coldest shoulder
with hopes to make just a little bit warmer the dreams and wishes
after the kisses wait for the moment of bliss or death the decision
obviously made with precision ive taking a chance for the daring
and i hate the hurt im out of clothes cuz' my patience is wearing
i sit dreamily in the sub concience ive loved all this and it shows
but the biggest blow happened when asked if he lived in local
who would she be with? the pain of the words "i wouldnt know"
they come and go the thoughts the dread desire the yearning
my stomach has zero steering wheels why in the fuck is it turning?
so back to the backseat the questions answers even true lies
but the tears fell from my eyes like rainfall pouring from the sky...
god why?! tell me please why cant it be? "son its not destiny...
either let it go or let it be" no! i wont you dont know what its like
the kind of love that even makes you turn down god's advice
so all i can do is stand and sigh hoping wishes will come true
and she'll stop saying the words ... and make the actions of i love you...


^ the dream ^
by sand....


fades in...

*God's voice*

"Eva he must love you...."

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this is................BEAUTIFUL..... i am speechless...

warmest tears soak the coldest shoulder//clever shit my stomach has zero steering wheels why in the fuck is it turning?// more cleverness

yo this was ill, vocab was sick, flow was off the scale.....
sand i will sticky this.......by the way do u want ur otha drop unsticked,,,,,,,,,

this was better than your other shit u had stickied. this actually deserves to be stuck. so some 1 wanna do it? i feel that if you took your shit to poetry youd get more respect. dont be afraid to be deemed a poet. `wUNn`


Dont be a herb, Return the fav.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52579

Dope ish here Sand, Seems like there's a sticky section reserved for .Sand. Every week haha but its well deserved mun, droppin it Nice, peep ma new one..."Like father, Like Son..."

.......Pz........

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na SAND deserves it, i might as well sticky his new drops cuse
peeps sleep on his shit constantly,.,,,,,,,,or dont reply at all
his otha shit had like 200 sumthin views n like 20 replies
that wasnt fair at all (lol i didnt reply)

damn this was nice. fuck you and your wicked flow.
I don't even know what to say anymore. you always stick in ill metas, and similes and everything, and it still flows perfectly. how? how god damnit! whatever dude, you know this is sick.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Thank you all for taking the
time to respond...this really
was just a quick thing because
emotions were running high
at the moment so i wrote i
wasnt going to post it but i
am glad that i did...

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i am sure they are glad too

Getting better ... pretty good.

i like this shit this cat is a true storyteller with ill worplay!!!!!!
much respect!!!!!

its too bad....really

the way things are

going...but that is

life..im learning to

finally understand it....

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Garbage
who would buy a cd and listen to this trash
1 word POOP

that was pretty good dawg keep goin were u at................................................ .................................................. ....