rules:
10 lines max
5 votes wins
no d/r or hate votes
spit ya shit asap
ill try to get my verse up quik but i got shit to do....

---------------wun----------------

yo ..check my battle vs MC PAT.-..
thanxs..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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I’m spawning polysyllabic forces that will really break your verbs down to a noun/
Same time break your heart from this loss how is that for a fracture that’s compound/
quit tryin ta beat me wit just ur pencil, you gotta have skill to fire verbal heat like me/
ill "out line" you like a stencil, eleminate all future potential, spit punches with tha forces of missles with deadly accuracy/
my rhymes hit with a sense of critical importance, from some one lackin verbal intensity im expectin lyrical ignorance/
no signifigance, every time you appear at an event you produce embarrassment/
your wack lyrics fill minds with minefields of self-destruction and selfless functions/
like gettin votes people know how to push my buttons, one of the mods can take this out like a luncheon/
how'd you lose 17 times? is there confusion in your mind,or can you not comprehend that ur time is about to end/
my knockout blows will leave ya "dazed and confused" give ya tha impression losing is a trend/

PLEASE VOTE ON THIS.IT IS GETTING SLEPT ON.IT IS BETWEEN ME AND MY WACK ASS BROTHER.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54587

yo imma drop later i been gone for a couple days.........peace

wun
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how much later were you thinkin bout droppin? its been 2 days and you still aint dropped...........................