Illful skiled dismissals, rippin' through ya 4 muscle tissues//
no~to~be~misused, leave ya weapin' with mentality issues//
brutally~hit you, odd and scared with scars that pierce~you//
if you were me and I were you I'd still probably diss you//
this a quick deliverance, quick and slick like lubricants//
your shit is vicscuss on delivery, like diarhea excraments//

o.k, WTF was this, it's like 6 lines!

whatever it was, it was ill....your rhyming ability and vocab are tight..

kepp elevatin and spittin!

very short...... how about you add like 15 more lines to it than repost it.. OoNnEe

Mke it longer and ya got sumthin here