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Old 06-02-03, 09:26 AM   #1
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Lynching The Incouragable People

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Hey-Yo, I''m a man who planned a scandal to man-handle the wack mammals of the rap panel////
My rhymes is like a noose that is wrapped tight////
My tounge is the knife that''ll leave u hung in the night////
Young in the light////
burned cuz u can''t handle the heat I spit in the mic////
I rip ya place up///
Slit ya face up////
the problem is u didn''t see who did it cuz I amputated u from the waist up////
I''m presently in the presence of seven dead presidents who''s white residence is larger than the fixodent on old folks denture sediments////
Now i got an evil cockiness that sustains such confidence it shines back on me with deserving prominence////
My body creates traits that''ll penetrate Satan''s gate and strip his cape to checkmate////
turn the brainfood he has on his main plate straight into a clean slate////
Instigate the date-rape and impregnate///
It all relates like hamburger does to steak///
Walking around like a duck who don''t give a fuck///
What the fuck is "Wobble Wobble"?///Like Slim I aint no "Role Model"////sippin back on a Pill bottle goin full throttle till i think philosophical like Aristotle///
I''ll rock a lil red hood to stuff ur ass blasted into my grandmother''s hand basket////
take u on a voyage more fantastic than Coolio on acid////
the lyrics i wrote should coax ya throat ta choke////
put a lump in it/////
like a speedbump wit a hump in it////
I''m like the deep end of a pool, if u can''t swim, don''t jump in it////But that''s just how the wind blows///i
let people drive my car underwater cuz i got power windows///
So u flatlined for the first and last time cuz your thoughts thought they could go past mine///
the topic of this shocking synopsis ends when I pop optics till they shoot outta sockets like snot rockets////
verbal prophet that''ll skin ya cap worse than Davey Crockett////
Even u wit a glock in ya pocket couldn''t stop it///
U like a lost possum who doesn''t know whether to eat salads or just to toss ''em////
inexperienced cuz u neva crossed the awesome who can open ya jaw some////
speak to u deeply and tell u where we get the rap laws from//// get ya shit straight, ya got ya facts squirmished////
more wack than a track by MC Taxidermist////shits affirmitive and then affirmished, im boiling and ready 2 explode like a loaded furnase////
i displayed my skillz like lyrical acrobatic drills///
comin off cabinet shelfs spittin hot metal shells////that could crack static like the shit a cavity fills////
u don''t rap for the love of the rap////
u just wanna shoot the loot///cuz u''s a fruit///if u were an apple i''d verbally eat u to the core////leavin u wit a relapse when u never even had a lapse before//// i appreciate ur persistance but u can''t rap so i''ma end ur exsistance spittin at ya from a point blank distance////spittin lyrics like volts of a thunderbolt similar to a thirty-eight hundred colt////Now its the night of your funeral////Face whiter than a tuna roll///all because u couldn''t flow toe to toe alive for five bars cuz u got chronic asthma////u missed ya dream////cause when you spit, you were puffin on anti-histamines...

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Old 06-03-03, 01:13 PM   #2
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to long for me 2 read
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Old 06-03-03, 01:15 PM   #3
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honestly.. space out the verse more, It's too cramped together for me to read.. if you do that I'll give you feedback
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Old 06-10-03, 12:14 PM   #4
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UPPN
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Old 06-10-03, 12:16 PM   #5
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ANOTHER PIECE OF RELEVANT MATERIAL... YOU SPEAK OUT ON OPINIONS BUT HAVE NO TRUE VOICE..

HEIL BUSH
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Old 06-10-03, 12:18 PM   #6
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Dude why dont ya try readin it
and on another note
i would never ever buy a cd or my friends for that matter of a bitch ass fag like you whinin like YOU
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Old 06-10-03, 12:18 PM   #7
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and dont you mean irrelevant
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Old 06-10-03, 12:21 PM   #8
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i meant relevant cause it was a sarcastic statement..

anyways.. wanna hear a dope piece on 9/11..
download sage francis.. makeshift patriot is the name of the track.. contrary to your open mided views..

but good in all..

im not gonna beef anymore though.. its a pointless argument.. cause it has no ending
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Old 06-10-03, 12:22 PM   #9
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yeah i have the song and CD DUDE
Dont really like that track anyways
I prefer Q strange Necro Ill Bill
Dmentd Rottin
Not really into backpack rap
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Old 06-10-03, 12:25 PM   #10
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well rock on with your bad self... lol
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Old 06-10-03, 12:57 PM   #11
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it was a nyce drop, lyked tha vocab, tha rhyme scheme was good, you could have spent more time on tha meaning of each bar, aight wordplay, stay spittin, this piece copld use sum work, but it was hott - nevathaless, stay real, peace, 1 luv
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