call me an asshole after i ripped yours?
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Let me call you Casper, because after this you be
ghost//
GrYm, you feared, because you're soft like the most//
Your time must be frozen, you're repeating the same
crap over and over//
Luck isn't on your side any more because I snatched
your four-leave clover//
None of the voters are gay, so I suggest you stop
sucking up//
And accept the fact you can't get out of the loop of
fucking up//
The Rap titan, you about to step in the middle of a
clash youd rather dodge//
Want to pay the price? Your life alone isn't close to
what it cost!//
I measure with high-value standards; you already
appreciate a simple quote//
Don't care you win with a 100% pure dick riders vote//
Don't mind to talk shit like a heavy load//
You really aren't sick, so no need to find the perfect
antidote//
When U read my writes it will lead to your first
EARection//
Punches and wordplays combined carefully in this rhyme
session//
A General will change fast to a dead souljah, you
increase on a negative point of view//
You'll be just my lunch, which I spit out after I
chewed//
The only reason you should be glad is because ya life
isn't at stake//
I could easily take, but I rather conquer it from an
emcee that totally awake//
I never underestimate fiends, but only giving 25% is
enough to remain supreme//
It must be enough to battle you with a static and
broken rhyme scheme//

Da General:

...

i bombz first and last! cast ya flag at half mast//
give you a gas bath, light a match...tell the morgue to tag that!//
You , just seems half plastic and half fag//
da GROUND you walk on seems to be constructed from bad math//
i'm a mental pyramid! you da jew that makes up a part of me//
my lyx, da whip that i crack right before i spark da b//
ya shyt's retarded ,d..... and ya krew right along with it//
you da type that grabs da mic after a night of tryin' ta bong whip-it's//
leave you dickless... well...actually, i'll shove that pebble in ya big lipz//
let a dog rape you in ya azz and snap a pic for ya kinship//
cut out ya heart with an old rusty pair of tinsnips//
damn...seems you never had one...no wonder ya shyt is so ridiculous//
to continue this, i'm gonna hafta shape shift ta blacnezz//
done, like dat in a split flat to counter act d'z bad babitz/
dis sum crack shyt! bombin' on boojhee azz submarine class faggotz/
like dis bicthes sadnezz open hiz chest to find his heart is on sum gap shyt/
dag blastit! where me pee-shootah wit boric capsules/
insert a couple in this horsefuckz adams apple/
take a ten pound boulder over my shoulder and smash dude/
yo, Bitch , i should smack you fa dat firestorm turned waterhole//
that's why i got ya hoe givin' head to a python. and she swallows whole//
ya ground is a spot for moles and other blind dirt diggers//
you couldn't get ahead if ya porn name was dirk dickler//
and take ya moms corpse back, and tell that stank bitch i'm sick of her//
and tell the board i'm servin' GROUND CHUCK bitch meat with his sisterz fur//

UH YEAH.. U TALK SHIT ON MY OPINION.. BUT YOU DO NOTHING BUT POST SHIT THAT HAS THE SAME MESSAGE AS 90 PERCENT OF THIS SITE.. ILL RIP YOU ON THE MIC.. LOL.. YOU FUCKING LITTLE TOOL.. GO FUCK YOURSELF.. YOU HAVE NOTHING ANYONE NEEDS TO HEAR.. WANTS TO HEAR YES... BUT THAT ONLY SHOWS THAT AMERICAS PRIORITIES ARE IN HATRED NOT INTO PROGRESS.. YOU NAZI.. FUCKOFF.. VOICE YOUR NO POINT NONSENSE MASKED OPINION.. IT HAS NO RELEVANCE TO THE WORLD TOMORROW OR A MINUE FROM NOW..

Dude you need to take Osama's dick out ya mouth and Sadam's out ya ss Bitch rip me then mother fucker

this threads gonna get moved or somin...to frontlines...anyway nice verse grim...very dope and good punches.
~1~

I DONT NEED TO RIP YOU... MAN.. YOURE DIGGING YOUR OWN GRAVE

HUH FRONTLINES

THIS ISNT A BATTLE MAN.... I DONT FIGHT ANIMALS I TRY TO FREE THEM...

lol, I love all the beef on this page.. RB rules..

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GrYm just ate you alive....now itz my turn................ Vegetables please,battlin me is ""riskier"" than Danny Devito tight-rope balancin' above 1,000 Bolivian serpents//cuz i got ""more"" lingiustic ammunition than Cleopatra had overzealous servants//so im about to ""break you down"" like Oreo's to digestive secretions//runnin'with cocky yet apprehensive legions, and still frontin' like ya style aint more ""one-sided" than Jerry Rices's ratio of Total Yardage to Pass Incompletions//nigga....O GryM need to rupture more ""Auditory"" nerves to achieve this type of ""defness""//cuz like comatose patients hooked up to Insecticide-filled oxygenators,this dickhead iz left ""breathless""//i'll fucking hang your Gastro-intestinal tract from the wall like Christmas ornaments//catz like you couldnt put ya town ""on tha map"" if ya gave out Latitude and Longitude coordinates//im sick of egotistic insubordinates//who think they bring skillfulness and indisputable knowledge//but like Prohobitionists of 1919,i support any of GrYm's demo manufacture and distribution to be abolished//so tell ya deceased sibling im about to give ya Visitation Rights//send my condolences...when you ""wet up"" like precipitation,cuz i make racially-discriminant Athiests""swear to GOD that NIGGA nice''...//as your career ""fizzles"" like Gary Condit's congressional position//'bout to make this cat another ""clueless dissapearance"",so tell Chandra Levy she can relate to untalented competition//so get off a Nas's nutz..cuz i know you more ""commonly on tha scrotum"" than the pubic parasites on Jenna Jameson//Queen dick-beater..huh???..um..whats that incompetent, illiterate-ass's name agian??//so phuk you...look at that picture from Lyrical Labyrinth...son u look like Ted Danson on Methampethamines//while i bring more ""nastyness"' than College Homosexual Sex VOL 2:Behind The Scenes..//u from the ghetto huh??,kidd the only ""projects"" you ever seen was the Freshmen Class of '01's Science experiments//u just a netcee....im a MC who got you ""beatifully served"" like Culinary Elegance//now..im about to shove my Air Force One's so ""far"" up ya ass, it'll leave ""Made In Taiwan"" indentations in ya nasal cavity//cuz that 52-10 Battle Record, just represents the $$52.10 cents in earnings u would make if ya had an MP3.com salary............................................ ...............................................bit ch-ass........ya brains inferior......just cuz you like callin' niggaz who over ya head....i'll use ya brains as my interior............................

Honestly you write ok but unfortunatly your rhyming skills and connecting words need a little more help not hatin just need you to elevate your multi's

grym, ur a tab elementary at times, like i see the set up and i expect sumthin, but then im slightly let down lol

no hte from me, u my boy you know that...

heres an example...


Your time must be frozen, you're repeating the same
crap over and over//
Luck isn't on your side any more because I snatched
your four-leave clover//

i expected clover cuz as a freestyler it just comes from over naturally,

i expected sumthin like

luck isnt on ur side cuz we smoke ur four leaf clover

or

since i cant find the end of this rainbow, ill snatch his clover, or sum shit i dunno

theres my buck 50

Wow that was a funny 1 JOSH

Kapone
I was key styling
if i had gone back over it beleive me i would a changed certain things