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Old 06-15-03, 01:51 PM   #1
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Keep'in it Gangsta

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Many niggas claim'in they hard but it's only the head and their dicks//Bia-bias wanna know who be spittin' it so slick//I already have one foot in the door and the other in yo ass//Get you so high so you can know the real meaning of first class//Fuck with me I'll bring you down-how that sound//Slap you upside your head rotating your brain so you can see shit backwards//Come to me forward but not niggas labeled cowardly cowards//I come to your hood dominating every door//Fuck what you heard I'm hear to bring some more//Got a problem? handle it with my friend named 9mm//If you don't then you got full proof to roll wit'em//I might be a female but I spit like a dude//I'm out like everyone, to get that loot//Niggas talking like they real special//yea special out the ass//Thanks for the frontin' thank-you for the laugh//Some say I'm just mean others say I just speak the truth-it up to you//I'ma do me and you who's I'll do//
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Old 06-15-03, 02:27 PM   #2
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EEEEK
needs major improvement in all departments
ryme scheme - multi's - word play
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Old 06-15-03, 02:32 PM   #3
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1. its hard to floow your flow
2. i never actuyally got roun to readin all of it cause well...i could follow flow (you have to set it out in a way people will be able to read it
3. your a newbie and youll learn..if your a femcee once youve gotten your act together and shit start looking for a crew..Pm me
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Old 06-15-03, 06:30 PM   #4
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OMG this is shitty, listen to the other dudes subject matter sucked rhymes unoriginal go back to school gurlie coz your hanging with the big dawgs

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