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Old 06-12-03, 03:10 PM   #1
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when you feel like you dont belong...

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theres this thing rite..a cant explain what it is
but ill do ma best to make it realate but you gotta feel it
this is hard..although im talking from experiance
some of you may think i speak truth..others think am delerious
but yo...you ever felt like your just walkin in shadows
no one notices you.....populalarty devours
a mean i wasnt the kid who got picked last in gym class
i was the head cheerleader ... everyone kissed ma ass
but .. a dont kno it just seems like they only wana kno you cause of what you are
and its usually thse people who idolise you whos gonna go far
theyre the ones youll meet at your high school reunion
with high paying jobs.while your claimin shit off the union
its crazy, but then again dont feel guilty
cause if it wasnt for you..
they wouldnt have the drive to become what they wanna do
although anyways..that feeling wen you jsut dont belong
like every day is tedious and shits twice as long
as it should be...and you just cant take anymore
of his life..thats why you flunked the classes and headed straight for the door
its really stupid to think that you can be driven away
but those peopl who came to school just to watch you walk past them everyday
in one way they suffocate you...the other they alienate you
pickin you out from the croud and lookin up to you
thats when you feel all alone....no room for another on that pedastle
and with thoughts off school work and practise you wrestle
which is more important? if you sho them you got flaws
they be all over you picking at you with unseen claws
you cant win can you? they alwasy on your case
if you the most althletic.or get the best scores on tests and good grades
they make youre sould black, youre heat cant feel
and with a lack soul you can easily fade into the background....becom unreal
and if you have a problem..no one cares
thats why you keep your front up.buy the best clothes...hae your own flare...
but you stand alone..the trendsetter the leader
when for one in your life.you just wanna be the backseater
sit down an listen rather being the one who always talked
not the one at the front with the followers who came in their flocks
fame is fickle even in high school
and at the end of the day..the populars are the fools
the ones who are ad dont wanna be like me.need to back up
and the ones who think they are but who arent need ta shut up
you bring people down or setting them up for a fall
but in reality you are the ones who dont belong

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Old 06-12-03, 03:18 PM   #2
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a mean i wasnt the kid who got picked last in gym class
i was the head cheerleader ... everyone kissed ma ass


^^^indeeed its bootyfull ass...fosho .......lol Nice poem
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Old 06-12-03, 03:41 PM   #3
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Nice poem
Much Enjoyed
good content
and kept me
listening all
the way through

Thanx

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Old 06-12-03, 05:23 PM   #4
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this one is really interesting.....i like how the way it was structured....the vocabs are alright not too much tho but its deep...

the emotions kept me reading it till the end....props for that...

nice job! i liked it
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Old 06-15-03, 08:40 PM   #5
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it was pretty good. i liked it. it wasnt the best of all time but i was glad that i read it. it struck me. good vocab and good structure.

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