Australia.....................highest rate of youth depression..................................and suicide...................

Treacherous p.......2003 here we go..................depression

Ever been real depressed but you dont no the reason why,
It 's because the heart is full of secrecy it wont expose the reason why,
Maybe it's love from your heart but you brain doesnt no yet,
It doesnt really matter what you want because your hearts already set,
Maybe the reason is spiratual, or the reasons are divisional,
Have you ever gone to bed at night dreading the morining,
Antidpressant pills wont stop the rainy days dawning,
Have you ever conteplated suicide or at worst slit your wrist,
Came home as a child crying, because the gave you the shot and you missed,
Laying on your bed for hours your head surrounded by gloomy thoughts,
worryingmore and more as these thoughts reveal themselves like worts,
Using countless numbers of drugs wont make the pain go away,
You have to face these inner demons it's the only way,
People try to comfort you but nuthiing they do or say will make the pain go away,

Chorus(x3)
Ever been real depressed but dont no the reason why,Sad enough to cry,
Depression there has to be a deeper meaning,
Because this spiratual bacteria wont go away unless you do some soul cleaning,

Have you ever sat in your bedroom writing page after page of rymes to escape reality,
Have you ever experienced defeat after defeat an then cursed god for having mortality,
Watched the floor crack and seen the foundation of your dreams begin to crumble,
Felt god was blaming you for sumthin and you was already humble,
The only words you confront the day with are those from youre stomach, a nervous rumble,
Loosin a girl or a friend can make you take these actions as such,
It caues massive internal damage but on the outside it doesnt look like much,
You feel like your hearts been eaten alive and in your chest there is nuffin,
Feel like never ever again will you bee seen out of yor bedroon laugin,


Chorus(x3)
Ever been real depressed but dont no the reason why,Sad enough to cry,
Depression there has to be a deeper meaning,
Because this spiratual bacteria wont go away unless you do some soul cleaning,

Aint finished need to do a third verse....but hit me up 4 what you think

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it was arlite.......a spell check needed...........
deep piece..............
vocab was kinda simple.........
line length was uneven.........................
topic was good............
flow was kinda off......
multies were lackin........
alrite drop overalll

this drop wasn't too bad. had a good topic. lyrics could've been better. multies woulda helped the flow. anyway...nice drop and can you peep this out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55989

mm maybe you should read it twice because some of it HAVE A DEEPER MEANIng thanks anyways.................peace
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Antidpressant pills wont stop the rainy days dawning,
When you are depressed it doesnt matter what its like outside it still rainy,

Came home as a child crying, because the gave you the shot and you missed, Thats like at school being passe dthe ball and you miss the shot................there are many more like that uppin

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i liked it, just gota work on the flow structure, but other than that i enjoyed it dawg

thanks uppin

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Have you ever gone to bed at night dreading the morining,
Antidpressant pills wont stop the rainy days dawning,
Have you ever conteplated suicide or at worst slit your wrist,
Came home as a child crying, because the gave you the shot and you missed

hot hot piece...liked it alot...lot of meaning

upppin thanks dogg

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uppin for treach ....................its all been said in the replys

uppin for this shit gettin hella slept on

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k i wasnt feeling yo 1st verse seems like wheneva u got a good rhyme, yo bars were 2 short or u couldnt back it up with the flow, nothing wrong with your actual lyrics, u made up 4 it sublimely tho in teh 2nd verse yo 1st 2 lines i was really feelin

vocab aight, wordplay more, subject matter- good

Eborted verdict- B

o yeh return the favour at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1008#post541008

ay man that was nice touchin drop from you yo i liked it alot

yo return tha favor on my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58004