Aight ya'll. I got real dope flow. Real dope flow. I need to up my vocab a bit. But, ya know. I got an underground deal wit Talent2k and they is shopping my music. Fubu and BadBoy thought I had quality. I juss want to know what ya'll think of my music personally.

best one : Place IM From

Listen to all if you can. But Place Im from is the best.

I did an always on time remake, and yes my girl friends is off key a bit, but she is hot to make up fo it. Good head. lol any way check this shit.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/shemymusic.htm

place IM from ...


beat is coo ... i think i hurd this earlier ... lol ... chorus is str8 ... iuno? ... something lacks in the realness of ya lyrics, i think your voice dont let people know u real bout what u talk bout ... content is BADBOYish ... i see how they would say u got talent ... not dissing but im not feelin this dawgie. but i like the fact u from the GANGSTA GLOVE TOO ...


1 luv

Always on time remake:

WHY did u basically RE-SPIT ja rules verse? Im mad confused

Place im from:

what is this? seriosully....i mean, your on beat..which is good and half the cats on here aint...but this shits kinda corny...i ono..

whatever

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IN MY OPINION....

dont do a demo...Where Im from aint really that coo atall...that remake of Ja Rule song iz BOOTSEY...the gurl was the only good shit about it..and she aint even that good...

imma give everything....
2/5 (thas bein nice, i wasnt feeln shiit)

~CIN LADIN~

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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre

WTF are u on crack bitin ja rule like that man...u think u gonna get dough with that or sumthin..it was the best track out of all 3 of em...where im from was ight but WTF ure track is 2 mins long??? no ones gonna sign u with that shit/ it was below average man... juss one tip dont brag like that when u cant back it up mayne..especially here

Aight lemme make this shit clear.

The always on time shit was fo fun. I had some free time in the studio wit my girl I had the beat on a cd and we did it. Atilla you can shut the fuck up.

Second of all, them is some old tracks. My new tracks is better and I should be postin them soon. I know I needed to up my vocab. I can flow though, and I wasn't Braggin. I do got talent believe it or not. And talent2k seems to think so, and so does Fubu. But, I unno. What eva ya'll think. Them is old tracks. My voice has changed now too. I add mo feeling when I rap. Should tha make these any better?

Dont hate ya'll.

I aint hatin im juss statin facts cuz in yo post u talkin like you were the shit and u had the sickest flow and record labels think u the shit...basically makin easy for anyone to criticize your tracks.....
thats why i told u not to brag that much if you cant back it up chump

u aight!but there's still room for improvement!the place i'm from my boy produced that track!lol

You got that beat off of Kazza didn't ya. Anyway though it was ok nothin great and I sorry I live i Chicago and there are no white gang members in black gangs I have black friends that are in gangs but they would neva let a white guy in one. I don't know maybe things are diffierent in Canada. Just try to make your lyrics believable though.

Canada. Im from Michigan nigga. Right by chicago. You is whack. Listen to the song again and listen fo the meanin. Dumb ass.

Dawg your in like a bedroom studio arent you? your echo-ie reverbish sounding makes it sound like it .. either that or your
not mastering these right . . .

flow is pretty nice
content is basic,.

not bad though.

Yeah how hard is it to flow with ur lyrics...so simple as you said need to up vocab

Naw bro. Im in some guys basement studio. Its aight though.