im the illest and sickest all out bitchiest//
im the rapper u wish didnt exist-ed//
im violent, a demon wit mind twitchs//
so u wouldnt wanna answer to this with the wittyist//
lyrically beaten female rapper im british//
not no american trailor park bitch//
im british, not rich im the witch of lyrical justice//

u fat prick, go suck some dick im writing lyrics//
i aint taking this as no joke, im broke, time i got rich//
ya hear me bitch?//

dont complain of no ear aches as i pound my music from my stero got it?//
or my glock 9 or maccy 10 will be firing at tht delicate head//
this aint a violent rap so dont complain, im dead//
in mind body and soul, i do regret.//

Existe ted
secuked shoulda been
im the illest and sickest all out bitchiest//
im the rapper u wish didnt exist in this//
cheesy

you need to just keep at it .. right now nothing goin right for your flow...structure.. meta's... content is that shoot shoot kill kill crap too so its real played .... keep at it tho

flow...not there...but still keep dropping and ur skill wit get better...

yea........keep tryin tho it'll come.........-1-

its good 2 see your still writing, vocab needs 2 be upped a lot and yo rhyme and subject matter lack a lot of originality, wordplay is a must for text.

Eborted Verdict- E-

jus keep at it and ull get there in the end