Yo, yo, My name be old but i ain't never been here,
I have no idea what to do, so I'm feeling like a queer,
Im rhyming it cos for all i know this is what you do,
When you wanna start a rap battle, who wants me? You?
I have no idea how to set it up
Cos i have the mental capacity of a duck
So if you wanna battle this,
Tell me where the battleground is, Don't take the piss,
You may say ill set it up you spit first,
But i dont know where its set up, im left hanging like fred durst.

So go suck a COCK

lol. be nice.

ummm.... you need to elevate...... A LOT. OR is this a joke?

o.k, this was just a bit on the side of wackiness, or to put it gently = it sucked!

but don't worry, everyone started off at this level, my first attempts were pathetic, but if you hang in there you will BELIEVE me, you will start to drop tight pieces, it just takes practice!

Try to use more complex vocab ie.."I have no idea how to set it up,
Cos i have the mental capacity of a duck...
try:I have ninguno thought, on how to set battles up….
Why? HELLO!, my mental capacity, is as acute as a duck…

add some multis etc.. as well. you'll get there!

you are.........................................[SIZE 30]WHACK[/SIZE]


oh yea....I'll battle since you said it in your rhyme.

your new name is WHACKED13