I am that heartless monster man/
Dont underestimate the power that I hold in my hand/
You think you can defeat me when no one can/
Im dat uncontrolable monster that they talk about in those story books/
On da mic Im a monster fuck spittin a hook/
They dont comprehend the severity of my destruction/
Beat niggas into concussions/
You better realize the significance of my being/
A monster and a human is like comparing the blind to the seeing/
This is just a step further Ive excepted my insanity/
I hurt nigga with no hesitation you get no compensation when Im done here I m headed for eternal damnation/
Only the strong survive and I am dat/
I merk whole races like SARS and Anthrax/
The souless monster kills like jeepers creepers/
Walking in all black somthing like the grim reeper/
Soon and very soon you will see the monster in actuality/
When I rise and reign and destroy all of humanity/
There will be a slim few who will survive to see the monster bleed/
Thats Armageddon also known as Da New Breed

nice vocab. iight verse nuttin special

this coulda been better, use some more multis cos your rhyming was pretty basic, the vocab was o.k, and also try to have the lines the same length, the flow comes out better!

Not bad however, keep it up!