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Topic...
Regret

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yo i;m check in but i can't vote in the polls you still want me to drop what i voted on?



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aight sure this is a reallyu goo way of doing it casue people sleep so so so much aight ama in................................................ .

staring at a blank wall cuz its my only comfort
a blanket made of wool and concrete floors magnify the hurt
bars shielding the sunlight from flooding into the room
and to my left the green mile..simulating my almost certain doom
crying myself to sleep everynight
depression tries to overcome but im puttin up a fight
i dont kno how long i can hold on though...full of anguish and agression
this is the times when i regret my caught on camera actions
when i fall asleep holding you to wake up huggin my pillow
or when i hear our childs laughter to realise its the winds whistles
theres holes in the wals where ive punched them real hard
making ma knuckles bleed.ma hopes gettin dark
theres no way out of this prision..and walls are gettin closa
guards walk by ma cell and shake there heards..im oficially a *no hoper*
terriorising thoughts.....mind numbing reality
right now anywhere rather than heres when a wanna b
Regret aint tha word man.....this is a hellua lot deeper
mind asking so many questions...im seeking a meetin with the reeper
I foned you yesterday told you not to come to visit
basically its not casue i dont love you..it the look on your face...a cant bear it
your so sweet and innocent ..what will make you see the truth..why you with a boi like me
Your not fit for my lovce..these surroundings shit boo why cant you see
you deserve so much better than a creep assed crminal like me
so i regret to say this but hun...you gotta leave

nyce drop pledge, lets see if this kat shows, i lyked tha feelin you put in this, stay real, peace, 1 luv

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alright not my best but i typed somethin up in word right quick


At 2:23 1989 on the 12 of April something major happened//
A lil boy was brought in my life and I quit rappin//
My girl stood their with shock in her eyes//
The baby wasn’t even a week old and already had a lock on her thighs//
I gotta new job and my lil boy began to get older//
But that’s when the downfall came and I started to get bolder//
Me bein the man of the house tried to keep this foundation standin//
And when my girl when on a trip the news came across the camera//
About how a plane just crashed and people think it was a terrorist attack//
I dropped my lil boy on the sofa but picked em back up cuz I thought it was an act//
Then I was expectin my wife to come home the next evening//
But when she didn’t reality hit me as I turned to the TV//
She was in the WTC and she died in the mission//
So years passed I struggled my boy didn’t care//
He hadn’t even hit puberty already sellin drugs hear and there//
One day I was on the block makin my daily runs//
I saw a tall figure in the distance but I knew he was holdin a gun//
I walked up closer cuz curiosity was killin me//
Knowin damn well that fillin me was his only tendency//
I walked up point-blank and stared in the niggaz face//
And it was so familiar and I wanted to put my son in his place//
So I screamed at the top of my lungs and snatched the gun//
It went off but hit nothing then he started to run//
I fired once caught em in the knees and that slowed em down//
I figured a couple more shots outta hold em down//
I didn’t fire just walked up on him cryin//
Inside my soul was slowly dyin//
I screamed “I wish u were never born and I know u feel da same”//
“u don’t love me so if I had the heart I would splatter ya brain”//
u aint do shit for one muthphucka in the family”//
I put drinks in the fridge I put food in the pantry”//
I gripped the gat with all might and I wanted to run//
Cuz since day one I regretted this homo bein my son//
He was the reason that his moms got caught in the crash//
He was the reason that his father started to smash//
He’s the reason that he grew up witta fucked up brain//
He’s the reason that white stuff was in this mans brain//
I dropped the gun and walked away in a steadily motion//
Then I started to pace myself I was headed for the ocean//
And then “Bam” I fell flat with a little life left to dance with//
And I regret not killin em when I had the chance then//

Pledge Had 24 Lines Of Heart, Showing The Love Of A Person Caring For Someone So Much, That They Do Not Want Them To See Them In Such A Condition...Brilliant...
Xquizit Had 41 Lines Of Confusion, Shooting People For No Reason, Really Made No Sense At All To Me...Crazy...

Vote PledgeOfPanther

thanks man.......... uppin.........1-0.....good battle though............................................ .....

I agree with Sureal, I'm going with P.O.P., her verse had more emotion, I feel that you both need to elevate. I wasn't feeling either verse, no hate, but both kinda bored me. That just how I feel, but in the end, P.o.p.'s verse left a better impression.

Vote=p.o.p.

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yeah mines was aquite one...no offence but i didnt feel i had to try much..................sorry 2-0 UPPIN

lol thats funny. the topic just didn't grab me. trust me if it was a more challegning topic then i would've smoked you

not an oustanding battle really...
pleadge was more consistent with the topic...and in my eyes had the better verse
whereas X strayed abit....the first part was decent but the rest kinda got muddled about...if you'd stayed on point then i would have voted for you
vote=pledge

^^Like The Other's Said...Pledge Was More Heartfelt And Wrote About Feelings And Emotions...X Was OK But I Weren't Really Feeling You When Killing People For No Reason...

Both Were OK But Pledge's Was Better To Read...

Vote - Pledge

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P.O.P. got this.Both was good but near the middle and the end of X's rap I got confused.It should have been something that should have been clarified.Some of the things that was said like the son reason that the mother died.I didnt get it.A little more effort should have been put into your verse.You should enter again and try again.