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06-19-03, 11:03 PM
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sKiLLs
IP: F43D 1E07
sKiLLs
MY SKILLS LIKE RIDE THRILLS BRING CHILLS WHICH REVOLVE AS WINDMILLS/ STRAPED IN A STRAIGHT JACKET AND HOG TIED CUZ BARZ I SPILL BE ILL HAVING A TENDACY TO KILL/ IM LIKE THIRTY BELOW IM SO COLD, MOTHER FUCKERS FROZEN IN TIME WHEN I FLOW/ MOTHERFUCKERS STUTTER THERE JAW AND I KNOW, IM THE MOTHEFUCKING SHIT WHEN I RIP AND I SHOW EM/ ELUDING THE COPS THEY BE TRYING TO APPREHEND ME/ RECIEVING THE HATE FINGER AND HAVING ME TELLING THEM COME AND GET ME/ THEY SWEAT ME, IM DEADLY FAR FROM BEING FRIENDLY I CREATE MORE RHYMES THAT THERE IS LEGS ON CENTIPEDS/ NEVER FORGIVE THEM APOLOGIES, RESORTING TO JEALOUSY AS A REMEDY , TO WHOM BE HEAVILY HEATED WITH ARTILLY, NEVER HESITATE TO DECAPATED YOUR BODY PARTS WITH CRITICAL ACTIVITY Last edited by MRsHARKie : 06-23-03 at 10:17 PM. |
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06-19-03, 11:30 PM
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IP: F43D 1E07
CHECK MY SHIT OUT AND LET ME KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS .
TIGHT OR NEEDS IMPROVEMENT LET ME KNOW sHARKie |
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06-19-03, 11:35 PM
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BANNED For Being A Dick
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IP: 7D0B D7B5
Jus a played out style
need to up on the vocab and wordplay also structure ya stuff a lil better to This was weak |
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06-20-03, 01:59 AM
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IP: 6FA7 7304
don think it was weak like dark lord said..
but it can use work it flows alright but its too short and played |
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06-23-03, 10:20 PM
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IP: 6A23 BD11
WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT IT NOW HAS IT IMPROVED LET ME KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS. IF IT NEEDS WORKS I UP FOR TAKING IN ADVICE IN NOT WERE THE SUPPORT
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