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Old 06-21-03, 02:03 AM   #1
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Who You (Remix) - Feat A9, JEast BullshiN'N Compilation

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Old 06-21-03, 02:31 AM   #2
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aight yo peepin yo shit, beat is kind boring, first cat is coo, feelin flow and some nice punchlines in yo shit. voice is ok

hook is nothing exceptional

second cat, aint really feelin how his shit kicked in, but after that it was straight

third cat, uhhhh.. i dono... ok

4th cat.... feeling this guys voice, flow is ok , lyrics is average,


overall this was ok, not really feeling it that much, but still yo, it was aight

keep spittin yall

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Old 06-21-03, 04:15 AM   #3
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yeye this shits playin now.... the beat is maaaaad borin man sounds like u made it in your garage or sumthin.....
1st cat: pretty ill, aint feelin ure flow that much but your lyrics is tight....

chorus sounds weird..i dont know how to say this like it gets annoying

2nd cat comes outta nowhere but after the weird intro its good man chill flow

3rd guy comes off the sickest..got a real ill voice, nice flow, real good verse..nice shit


overall it was ight..i wouldnt bump this but it was good juss not my style ... keep spittin
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Old 06-21-03, 04:44 AM   #4
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up the vocals.....

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Old 06-21-03, 04:44 AM   #5
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if u just used the first verse....it would be perfect as an intro to a cd......
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Old 06-21-03, 11:46 AM   #6
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Yeah i Figured The Vocals Were To Low But I Had To Use Headphones It Was Late..Ima Fix Em Now..WTF Do You Mean As An Intro..LMAO...??
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Old 06-21-03, 01:49 PM   #7
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i remember the original version of this.. shits pretty dope..
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Old 06-21-03, 06:18 PM   #8
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it just seems like the beat is a build up to something....u know..like it would be a good intro track for a cd...

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Old 06-23-03, 03:53 PM   #9
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Old 06-25-03, 12:33 AM   #10
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Well Skeezzerrs....


Flow Was Nice From You.. Content Was Nice .. Ha @ Michael Jacksons Nose Hahahahahaha .. Delivery Nice .. Chorus Catchy Hahaa... Second Guys Style Is Nice .. Flow Is Pretty Nice, Content Is Nice.. Delivery Pretty Good... You again good.. Third Guys Got Nice Flow ... good delivery .. good content overall dope shit..

dope track skeez..

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Old 06-26-03, 01:59 PM   #11
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lol i made this beat about... what... 6 months ago? lol it was iLL then!
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Old 06-27-03, 02:01 AM   #12
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LMAO Words..Give Me New Beats Now Nigggggg
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Old 06-27-03, 02:57 AM   #13
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actualy homie i will... not right away.. i cant feel rushed... lol
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