track number 6, then concept is about growing with age, probably.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/johnny6feetmusic.htm


lyrics:

(v1)
a few years ago, i stood on the brink of manhood/
quietly contemplating what would happen, and could/
at the brink before the void without image or noise/
i stepped into the blackness and changed from a boy/
experimented in advanced stages of drunkeness/
watched rooms spin and move in, mood sunk to stress/
calculated units, waistline expands and contracts/
which taught me i could get fat, reverse and come back/
had my virginity shattered to a million pieces/
because the body wants constantly, the "filling 'em" thesis/
so why should i resist? i pushed the boundaries/
reached peaks, couldnt speak, with these girls who were down with me/
i pushed my weed tolerance, sat hypnotised/
at my reflection in the mirror with the cryptic eyes/
i've explored my interests and now some have died/
its time to take the next route which comes to mind/

(hook)
the next challenge is (whatever comes to mind)
i'll be having it (whatever comes to mind)
i strike balance with (whatever comes to mind)
the next manuscript (whatever comes to mind)

(v2)
when i was 15, i pushed my physical ability/
to see how strong i could become with my will in me/
practised patterns and meditation, mental levitation/
and made the proclamation to beat all the adjasent/
heavy bags hung from metal hooks took the impact/
of kicks and punches, they shook and swung back/
i lost brain cells when i didnt train well/
when my sparring partners caught me off gaurd, the pains swells/
i trained my mind, read books from the greatest authors/
subject matter from love stories to human slaughter/
from laughter, altered states and the stepping of time/
came to realise that these journies reflected mine/
it blew my mind, i had to flip back and takes notes/
take a degree to extract exactly what they wrote/
snapped it closed and took a long look at the book's spine/
tried to figure out the next step that comes to mind/

(hook)

(v3)
they say the journey never ends it just begins again/
so now i'm trying to push hard my skill in the pen/
try to achieve the perfect verse, utterly flawless/
find the perfect beat to match and record a chorus/
try to incorperate aspects of vocab and imagery/
multi's and wordplay in blanced symettry/
i studied the greatest rhymers in all genres of music/
discarded lines, thought up new subjects and how i could use it/
tried to inspire others into raising the bar/
and projects their brain waves amazingly far/
to dip into their own experience, thats keeping it real/
and hopefully one day i'd be peeping a deal/
now, i've got another goal to expand my inner soul/
another task to take me closer and pass the winners pole/
i aint chose it yet but i'll forever run in time/
as the man who perfected whatever comes to mind/

(hook)

street dreams/all eyes on me beat lol... its aight.. need more emotion i think.. lyrics pretty nice tho

more emotion man you sound like your just trying to get it done...your flow and everything is fine just your emotion needs work

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please dont ever use a nas beat again

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cheers for the feedback guys, with the except of this freeposting herb.




man, just becuase you said that i might just record 12 audios with nas beats and mail them to you to piss you off, eat a dick and give constructive feedback next time.

yor talking over a beat....thats not rapping, you have no delivery, your doing some wierd shit with your voice for it to "sound good" i guess, which its not, your lyrics are very basic....and your quality is real bad....

start over....stop doing that shit with your oice...you dont sound scary, try to spit more fluidly...instead of sounding like you are reading directly of a piece of paper, and simply giving a speach

is that better

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