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Checkin before spittin

This is my check in verse will be up soon


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this is my check in................................................ .................................................. ................................

Beginning
I 'spit my shit' while ya 'lick ya clit' and you 'ride on dicks'//
I 'flip the switch' to show how ya records filth cause ya a 'bitch that bit'//
In truth ya really just a craftsmans, a fool//
Thats an act you put on so you can get ya hands on "tools"//

Building Up
(T)his (h)ideous (e)lephant is a (H)ick (a)sshole with (n)o (d)ick (s)hits the true element//
(O)ne (f)ight is stoppable, I say (G)ood (o)nly (d)ykes (s)top I thought good he'll stop and see this rhyme is un-toppable//*
You'll need a water to drink after you see what I wrote//
I'm not worried about ya spit cause ya raps are at a lyrical drought and ya skills have sunk//


Finisher
Say something witty as your last remark//
Tommorow yall be dead with ya last memory a dog bark//**

*Read all the letters in parenthesis

**Killed by a dog

Probably merked but one of my better verses

Yo if you get banned can you come back?

Wat happens if you do?
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whats this crew ur repin i see its called N.Y.G,well i rep U.T,and if it was ur whole crew Vs ME,id still murk all u bitches 1 by 1 lyricly//
now u lost to GOD all u need to do is get murked by Jesus,i kill with out Rea-sons,fuck fire i spit FROST so its funny ta sit back n watch peyo think 'HOW DID THE HEVENLY WHITE MAN FREEZE US//
with sharp enough rhymes watch how i Guilatine Ya Face,ur Crews a Discrase,so ill do everyone a favor n Murder ur Race//
how do u expect to get respected when ur AVATAR is a Child With a Gun,n ur styles not bringin flames cuz if it was ur style would by MILD n My Flames Would be from The Sun//
look at this wannab kid try n be real Rappers,grab ur spine n break it in half so watch as i Snap-Urs,peyo couldnt be the real slim shady if his rap name was marshal MAth-Ers//
how u gonna battle me with a record of Four n Six,when i slice cock is the only time ur gay ass is Hurt-in Dick,even if u masterbated to ur rap u couldnt post up a Verse-thats-Sick//

aight both verses are up so vote this up peeps holla............................................. .................................................. .........

Yo awnser My homeboy's Question

And then I'll vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote-T.H.O.G

better punches and flow.....wasnt feelin peyo as much but it was an iight drop.....but not enough...

good battle

YEA....GOOD BATTLE...1

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i dunno i guess ur not aloud to come back n if u do i guess u just get band agian i dunno ask a mod or somthing..................................



keep upin

(T)his (h)ideous (e)lephant is a (H)ick (a)sshole with (n)o (d)ick (s)hits the true element//
(O)ne (f)ight is stoppable, I say (G)ood (o)nly (d)ykes (s)top I thought good he'll stop and see this rhyme is un-toppable//*

^ yeah that an i kinda thought that sucked....

Hah, that's funny, everybody doin that shit, "T.H.E. H.A.N.D.S. O.F. G.O.D." cuz of IceBerg did a good one on me... but like, that's lame, it'll only work on me cuz i have periods after each letter in my name... i wasn't feelin peyo, hands got this hands down.

Vote=Hand's
Reason=Peyo did'nt come harder than I expected
keep ya head up
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