iight i'll spit first but it'll be an hour or so cuz i'm jus gettin up and now i'm really busy but i'll spit first...jus don't rush me

rules:

15-30 lines
5-15 bars
no crew hate or d/r votes


i'll spit first check in

I'm checkin in, one of my first raps in lines, but hey, i'll drop after you go................................................ ............................

this shit should be good.. good luck to ya' both.............................................. ............

alright didn't have enough time to spit dis shit so its quik..i'm off to practice...


you spit ugly shit no wonder why his rap is contaminating
server double doses just to beat him even if he was collaborating//

i show acts of violence but taktik keeps up his acts behind scences
cant ever see me like he had blind genes fuck your sanity like i fuck up your rhyme scheme//

Shit kid, my heat never cooling, this bitches spit will look like this dawg was drooling
anotha loss this cat must be choosing, i'll throw a fucking wheel at him, so he really could be tired of losing//

Taktik so wack, germs couldnt give em a cold (he'll never be ill), my illness bold, truth told, stair- case my way to tha top, till this chumps brain folds buys lines that goes unsold, his jewelry's old, couldnt rhyme nice if his verse was written with bars of gold//

My illness he couldn’t catch it, Split ya brain and have fractions, my punches, i packed it, like rocky films re-inacted put ya head in a backpack n sac it//

c I’m deadly, like hepatitis attacking ya liver, so then call me an inner killer unlike you I’m not jerking off, but I still cum iller, this threads like bingo, cause I’m an instant winner//

hottie already rocked it, my lethal method hits you so quickly, Taktik is asking to how to pause it unbeatable by this weaklings attack, so stop it, couldn’t get head if his record was switched opposite//

Xecutives Representative Presents.....THIS FEMCEE'S LAST BREATH

Spit lyrcal bullets at max speed so you can't "D"uck my "S"ick-ness/
Verbal "magic" how I switch the "D" wit the "S" so you can "S"uck my "D"ick bitch!//
Take this, my flow "swallow~less" like a virgin's BJ, the "first~time"/
After my lines, you couldn't give ya "conscience enough weed" to get ya "hopes~high"//
My lyrical embrace concaves your spine till' it taps da back of ya rip-cage/
You'd have to rename my country "HURT", jus to say I'm "In~Pain"//
You'd probably have to put "C-C-C-C" jus so your rhymes could "blast-off"/(C4...)
You'd have to "throw pennies round da homeless" jus to "blow people's hats off"//
Your lyrical "imagery" like old n' useless "magnets", true "un-Attract-iveness"/
You don't need a "mirror~to~manure" jus to "reflect~your~"Shit" n' wackness"//
Your flow a "clone" to "shit", like they took "genes" strait from a "turd"/
So instead of slappin you, I'll use a lyrical "enema" to "hault~your~words"//
Your puny lines like forgotten "birthdays", strait up "thoughtless"/
Your rap level claimed "close-to-me", is like the "Scottish" around the "Lochness"//(only a myth)
It's like "invisile ink", ya "signature" don't reach my mind, suggestion is for you too "Re~Sign"/
You ain't seen rhymes like mine, the only time lines like this are comin' at me is in "rewind"//

Breather before the merking.....

My rhymes rip~inner~tissues, like you subscribed to a "touching~magazine", left wit "personal~issues"/(touching=personal,mags=issues)
You like "pregnant~wit~a~girl", don't need the "ultrasound" to "test" the "bitch~within~you"//
Your outta "taktiks" hope you can act dead, cuz we gotta re-hearse/(fit ya for ya coffin....)
You "dropped" ya shit like it "fell", I come harder than "backin~trucks" wait for my "Re:verse"//(reverse..backin trucks)
My verses cause "iris~damage", so Hottie, you up for a little "blind~dating"???/
Or I could remain "rollin'" over ya rhymes like I'm "in-LINE skating"//(doin figure 8 round' ya words)
My "sound effects" like from action movies, cuz I seriously "effect" you wit "sound"/
So to finish I got this shit like "broken shoulders".....Hands Down//

No hate....you know I got mad respect for u

This right here was heavyweight..............gotta say taktik got it with crazy word play and punches...........hottie you came ill as usual but I don't think you gave it the time it needed.....damn....this battle was sick.........peace

Vote = taktik

if i could vote it would have to be for taktik.........
hottie your shit was tite too..........
but taktik had better ounches and a smoother flow.......
vote=taktik
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yea u did come pretty damn hard taktik..next time i'ma battle u when i got enuff time to sit down and write it...too damn busy

1st uppin dis shit

LOOK AT YOUR RECORD!!!!! Your almost on the front page for top ten records (i would think) I had to come hard or not even come at all, besides, these are lines not bars (i usually spit in bars) and when I make lines I don't take more than 45 minutes often n' that's all this took me but you brought good shit too so I dunno wat yous sayin...anyways, UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

lol huh..i was jus tryin to give u ur props thats all lol calm down lol...nice battle 4sho u did good lol

both of you had nice verses but i think taktik took this, it didnt seem like hottie put much thought into her verse, her lines we nice but just a little to basic.

i like everything about taktiks verse except for

You'd have to "throw pennies round da homeless" jus to "blow people's hats off"//

evertything else was nice, it flowed better, and punches and word play hit harder,

vote = taktik

iight 2nd uppin.....................
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Yo hottie I wan't hatin yo jus explainin, sorry bout dat..............................ANYWAYS.........u ppin 4 votes ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Jus leave ya link ppl, and I will check it out wit an honest vote..................later

'ey im gunna give this one up to taktik cuz all of his lines were really well thought out and he brought it harder this was the best battle i've seen since i've been on this site and i got respect for both y'all and i'ld like y'all to hit me up on my battle w/ b-dub or b-squared (both currently on the first page)

Amp