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Old 01-29-04, 09:35 PM   #1
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For every 1,000 that came talken-none walken-
But a 1,000 came and went each with endorcements for coffins.
Go ahead and diss me I’ll show how much I cair-
You commercial fuck the only 20’s you’ll see is on a wheelchair.
The venomous tongue-
cuts your AIR time in half like a collapse lung.
I’ll rip you fans and they fam from mother to son….
There no innocent bistandards once war begun.
My mixtures-1 rag ½ bar ½ explosive liquor.
my glands produce saliva sample of napalm elixour.
Sure There are plenty of m.c.’s iller then me-
But 91 out of 93 are strapped to life support and i.v’s.
Anyone dissing m.k.c gets lyrically and physically fucked up-
Weather enemy…. or friend to me… you get stuck up.
These slow fucks more concearned with they fast bucks-
my mic alone hold enough dimes to leave my fans bankrupt.
Ill rip your script and ban you from every website-
The only royalty you receive is a refund for that shit you copywrite.
There to many dick riders saying THEY FUCK with me on they mic-
NONCENTZ is hetro so ask yourself if they my type?
You wont last in a battle… my punchline win fist fights-
Like a dose of ridlen you m.c.’s is only half as hype.
For each word spoke-the source writes a new quote-
Rappers is weak sex jokes-you don’t suck you deep throat.
I’m the illest quotation-slash period exclamation-
You think Your iller then me …
but question yourself like the 3rd punctuation.
Lets get back to reality you got no chance to hope-
Cause against me you’re a bad april fulls joke –
Your rhymes is a hoax.
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Old 01-29-04, 10:15 PM   #2
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Damn Word. . Ain't Seen You Drop In A Minute But You Come Back With Some Straight Fire, Forreal. . Flow Was On-Point. . Vocab, As Always, On Up There. . Multi's Made This Piece/Flow Dope. . You Had Some Ill Quotables. . Everything Was Clickin In This Piece, Glad To See You Back Dog.

My mixtures-1 rag ½ bar ½ explosive liquor.
my glands produce saliva sample of napalm elixour.
^ ^ Dope Shit There.

These slow fucks more concearned with they fast bucks-
my mic alone hold enough dimes to leave my fans bankrupt.
^ ^ Damn. . Just Damn. .

You wont last in a battle… my punchline win fist fights-
Like a dose of ridlen you m.c.’s is only half as hype.
^ ^ Nice Play On Ridalin. . You Win.

Ey - Check 'Lookin' For Love' on this page. . or hit up 'Make It' on iunno what page, wherever the sleepers put it. . or check 'Doper Than Thou'. . I think DTT will be more down your alley. . Thanks Cuz.
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Old 01-30-04, 02:04 AM   #3
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Damn yo this one really got me goin, the vocab blew me away, the flow kept movin smoothly, multis only added to the movement of the flow, overall this one was damn good, and your punches (whoever you were punchin heh) were ill as fuck. 9/10
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Old 01-30-04, 05:37 AM   #4
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nice to see ya post'n... thought this was on par with your usual standard, thought you worded it well, making it easy to read, with some nice metaphors, and good punches..... it flowed pretty somoothly too..... yeah nice drop twin....
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Old 01-30-04, 12:44 PM   #5
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Thanks I Know I Been Out A Grip But Im Back Full Charge And Looking For Collabs And Moves So Anyone Hit Me Up
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Old 01-30-04, 01:09 PM   #6
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Old 01-30-04, 01:21 PM   #7
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Goddamnnnnnnnnnn.
Aint Seen You In A While Word, But Damn You Came Back Hard As Fuck On This Twin.
The Flow, Vocab, Multis All Fire In This Nigga.
A Deff. 10/10 Good Ta Have Ya Back.
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Old 01-30-04, 02:42 PM   #8
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Good piece...havent seen you around lately..but anyways...good drop...had a nice flow some very creative lines upped vocab an some wordplay...i liked the multies in this..also the similies...very well done...keep at it man pz
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Old 01-30-04, 02:56 PM   #9
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Good piece..nice to see you back...I see you haven't lost a thing...this was nice..
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Old 01-30-04, 03:00 PM   #10
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Damn Word glad to see you back dawg?! You came back strong an hittin like always man! This shit was no doubt ill as fuck man.....flawless.........good shit an as always a pleasure to read your work.....hope to collab wit ya soon! Oh yea dawg check my Your My Worst Enemy Piece....I wrote it a while back..........once again man welcome back!!
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Old 01-30-04, 03:10 PM   #11
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Hey WordPerfect..remember me its Bmack...i used to be in B.R.E...but this shit was straight fyre...nothing less..you always bring it hard..good rip
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Old 01-30-04, 03:40 PM   #12
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thanks hopefully we can get collabs going and spike make sure you hit me twin
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Old 01-30-04, 09:06 PM   #13
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Old 01-31-04, 12:49 PM   #14
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