this battle is like semi newbie vs. real newbie he doesnt care what the rules r just that i spit first aight so get ready for some light weight action lol

gimmie some time since there aint no limits i'll be up in some time dont get impatient (hate that 100 character rule)

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this is my first rthym is not going to be good but ill give it a shot >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Well children lets all learn how to battle, i can see you think its like a horse so get a saddle//
Im gunna teach you stuff you never thought that you would learn, when you tell your parents their faces will be struck with concerne//
Im gunna mold you like you was a peice of clay, and mess with you form and shape all day//
im the master your just my young padawan, so now listen to me or you'll be gone//
I'll destroy you leave you on the ground to lay, and watch as people come around and pray//
Oh poor McTuffles we should have warned you of amp, he's like tha people that killed the bear at "band camp"//
But dont worry mamma wont have to know, we wont tell her that you were beat up by a fro//
My rhymes fly past you at incredible speeds, just ask b-squared twice they made him see r.i.p//
you dont have a chance give up and surrender, or you'll be eatin my front fender//
When you came in here you looked all enthusiastic, but now you look like you swallowed plastic// (Chokin)
Your the kid that always thought he was cool, well guess what, we aint in school//
Im bout to make this nice dream of rappin for u hell, and you aint gunna wanna come back because you fell//
Im gunna leave it at that so lets go see, im gunna be back with my fairlady Z



Peace

well lets wait and see what you got i know your not on so ill be back aight peace for now later (damn wasnt 100 characters)

even though he aint posted when he gets back it'll be on the first page up up uppin (hate 100 character rule)

o yea everyone on my each line is like a bar its not supposed to rhyme with the next one ok just to let you know aight

learing not that hard, its gettin it all down
you'll be see'in stars when in done
i rap so fast u dont understand where im comin from
ill hit u so hard that u wont wake up
ill knock u out in the first round you'll stay down for the count
the afro WILL never beat my tuffles there like wings they stick out so far, i look like the little devil
but the girls still love me
i spit flat rthyms, i split your mind
dont waste my time with ur baby rythms

peace

amp obviously won this. he had better everything. do me a favor and vote for my battles in my sig..................

yo amp took this one, no doubt about that
better overall verse, better punches, better metas
Mc u came mad weak right there, no punches or no real disses
come harder on ur next battle

vote=Amp

yo check out my battle and put a vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61952

thanx

amp won this no prob the other guy = huge newbie

vote == amp

Can you return the favor and vote on this fairly:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61922

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Damn straight to wut Agony jus said d00ds. No real competition to speak of, its a K.O. fer Amp.
Gotta be werkin on thoes punches Mc.

Vote Amp, and damn this 100 post b4 u can poll shit!!!

i lost big time i really sucked but im a newbie
i still really lost ........................,.....