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Old 06-22-03, 07:33 PM   #1
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juss some quick MULTIES furr yall hiphop heads.... lemmy get some feed back

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DiS ShiTs FoR EverYBoDy DaTs REAL!!!!

EverydaY on my streets, da ''(DROW Gets WEIGHED UP)''
and a different ''(HO gets LAID UP)''
but i aint fuckin wit a HO dat got (NO TITS, STRAIGHT UP)
Alotta cats flow, and ya (KNOW its MADE UP)
I deal wit beef so when I see it, i (HOld my PLATE UP)
then im (EATIN ya FOOD), dats how im (TREATIN DIS DUDE)
The way im (SPEAKIN is RUDE)
cause i will leave ya six (FEET AN ITS TRUE)
and im (speakin ta YOU)
I pull out da (HEAT AN I SHOOT)
because im in da (STREET AN I MOVE) so SlicK ya ChicK didnt even (SPEAK an i KNEW) dat we would soon screw in da bitch in da back (SEAT OF MY COOP)
im gunna (FUCK DAT CHICK)
...yall bitches (LOVE DAT SHIT) im da man if ya wanna (THUG DAT SPIT) flows or ya wanna big man so u can (SUCK FAT DICK)..
Cats still member when i (STRUCK DAT CLICK) wit NuFF CaPs not even TuFF CaTs could (DUCK DAT CLIP).. yall is sweet .. .. so im have to start (BEIN SOUR) and keep standin tall like da (C N TOWER)...but cats like you, they put the (''C'' in COWARD)

IM OUT FUR NOW...Holla AT YA BoY '''SKiTTz'''.... One LoVe...keep it gully

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Old 06-23-03, 12:51 AM   #2
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When I read da Title , I thought this piece would be Great..... but Its Obviously NOT............ Ur Multies made to sense , They were Simple as Hell........Elevate dawg

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Old 06-23-03, 12:53 AM   #3
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Hmm... they were aight
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Old 06-23-03, 07:54 PM   #4
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ISGINEAHNMENMHNHIOWEMHOPNEWMIOPHMEMNHOPEMHIEWMJJIP MRTJMROPWEJPOERMKJONE4MOMJHORMTOJM4EOMETJOTMJOP
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Old 06-23-03, 07:55 PM   #5
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Old 06-29-03, 10:03 PM   #6
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yall dont kno what ur talkin about . . . if u seen me ya woulnt say it to my face cause yall would get popped, but respect for ur judgment that means nothing hahaha . . .keep hating me cause im better then u . . i like dat shit 4real..

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Old 06-30-03, 03:47 AM   #7
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Hey a little schoolin' on you...rhyming at the end of every line is not a multi...this is a multi:

LIFE IS A TEST, AND I GOT STRESS. I THINK OF SUCIDE AND DEATH, BUT ONLY IN JEST. I LOVE EVERY BREATH. BUT IT'S A MESS IF I'M THE ONLY ONE LEFT, AND I BET I GOT THE BLESS TO KEEP ME UNDER ARREST.

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RHYMING WORDS:
1. TEST, JEST, ARREST
2. STRESS, MESS, BLESS
3. DEATH, BREATH

NEAR RHYMING WORDS: ALL OF THE ABOVE + LEFT AND BET

ALL AND ALL 10 PUNCHES/2 BARS: THAT IS A MULTI
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Old 06-30-03, 03:54 AM   #8
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lmao ^^^^^^^^ those werent even close to multis kid

a multi is usuaully words that rhyme together with the same syllables if the syllables are to off then its forced heres multis

i'll drop some multis for you to pick up on

those multis you dropped were very simplsitc didnt make much sense they rhymed but were way off
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Old 06-30-03, 08:11 PM   #9
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multiez- from one of my past versez as an example:
"astrophysical ritualz of habitual lyrical visualz// spiritual messages seep deep witin ya subliminal ventriclez"
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Old 06-30-03, 08:35 PM   #10
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When I read da Title , I thought this piece would be Great..... but Its Obviously NOT............ Ur Multies made to sense , They were Simple as Hell........Elevate dawg


it was a cool piece dont let that get you down 1..
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Old 06-30-03, 10:06 PM   #11
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here i am again for more critism...*sigh*

alright sometime people just mess other words from another...like multies from simplistic rhymes and yeah with parenthesis?....i guess someone needs a rap dictionary...i dont really use rap dictionary but i read thesarus and webster's or even scientific ones every once in a while but yeah thats not the point...better know what multies are aight??

hmm...i hate the parenthesis style ish...aint really workin on some parts they did a bit but u just aint gotta have to like use it on the whole verse...

they put the (''C'' in COWARD)
^^ this is more like "u put the 'duh' in dumb"

but anyways...ery1 has been there...practice is all it takes and some GOOD READING...hehe


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