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Old 07-02-03, 02:58 AM   #1
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"Go Gangsta on the Bitch" feat. Gangsta One

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[Intro]

(MC-CM R-Ryder): "Hey yo, Gansta..."

(Gangsta One): "What..?"

(MC-CM R-Ryder): "Let's go gansta on this bitch..."

(Gangsta One): "Whateva, white boy..."

(MC-CM R-Ryder): "Ha!"

(Gangsta One): "Man, u sure ain' no nigga..."

[Chorus]

(MC-CM R-Ryder): Let's go gangsta on this bitch...
(Gangsta One): Forsur, nigga...
(MC-CM R-Ryder): Let's go gangsta on this bitch...
(Gangsta One): Fuck...
(MC-CM R-Ryder): Let's go gangsta on this bitch...

[Verse 1: MC-CM R-Ryder]
What happend is this bitch cheated on me,
The fuckin' hoe spitted on me...
I say "Fuck you bitch!" And she keeps on walkin',
I'm pissed as a ragin' bull, she can't stop talkin',
To that fucking dickhead walkin' beside her,
So I figure I go get a friend of mine and drive by 'er,
I'm gonna go gangsta on this bitch,
To kill the stupid whore is as inviting to scratch an itch,
That bitch can suck my dick,
She's gonna get down and lick,
That guy's ass crack up and down,
You're gonna be able to hear her scream when I kill her all aroun' town,
So how am I gonna kill this fuckin' hoe?
Well, lessee...there is an old friend I know...

[Chorus x2]

[Verse 2: Gangsta One]
I see this ol' white boy I used to know//
Walkin' up the street, lookin' kinda low//
But when the fucka gets here his fuckin' head explodes//
His face is as red as fire, it looks like it's about to implode//
I say: "Sup nigga?"
He says: (MC-CM R-Ryder): "THAT FUCKING BITCH I'M GONNA KILLA!!!!"
I've seen niggas blow up, but not this bad//
But what he asked me to do next was fuckin' sad//
(MC-CM R-Ryder): "Dawg, can you kill the bitch for me?"
Now what was a nigga to do?//
This guy was a good friend, that much is true//
"What the fuck r u talkin' 'bout!"//
So the white boy told me what it was all about'//
I told the crazy white boy to get the fuck outta ma crib//
He looked like a fuckin' baby with a bib//
He was pissed off//
Ticked off//
He took a swing at ma black ass//
But, I blocked it, thanks to that judo class//
The white boy stormed outta there//
And I yelled as he walked out: "Don' do nothin' stupid, ya hear?"

[Chorus x2]

[Verse 3: MC-CM R-Ryder]
The fucking pric didn't wanna help me...
But I fuck it, that guy won't stand up to me,
I got in my 1967 Cheverolet,
I knew for that guy, it was to late,
I drove aroun' to my x-girlfriend's house, I was huntin',
What did I see? A whole lotta somethin',
They were fuckin' on the picniic table I gave the bitch,
She was leanin' down, sucking the guy's fucking dick,
I stepped on the gas pedal, nothin' stopping me now,
"YOU FUCKING BITCH! YOU'RE GONNA DIE NOW!!!"
BANG! It was over so quickly,
I was glad I killed that bitch quickly,
Now, I'm sitting here, jailed,
Regretting what I had done, wondering how that bitched got nailed,
Well, it's over now, this is how the story goes,
I will die and rot in here, that I already know...

[Chorus x3]

[Outro]

(Gangsta One): "Damn...that white boy had it comin'...fuckin' crazy-ass lunatic...well...fuck it...I guess that's how shi' goes..."

<Events in this song are not real. They were all written by MC-CM R-Ryder and Gangsta One through e-mails.>
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Old 07-02-03, 06:54 AM   #2
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<Events in this song are not real. They were all written by MC-CM R-Ryder and Gangsta One through e-mails.>


^^LOL^^ You Think Your REal Gangsta Then!

Anywa, This Piece Was Pretty Average, You Had a Decent Idea BUt Try To Put It Out More, The Flow Was Dope In Some PLaces And Choppy In Others, Peeps Round Here Arn't Impressed By Fake Gangsta's Like Yourself...

Keep Elevatin'
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Old 07-02-03, 11:03 PM   #3
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A'ight, thx for yo feedback. We need some mo feedback though!
If u lookin' then say somethin' dawgz!
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Old 07-02-03, 11:41 PM   #4
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I liked the real life one better man...this one was kinda choppy it seemed when i read it, but it prolly sounds better if your actually saying it to a beat, but because i dunno what it is i cant say...the message is kinda whack though man lol, gunna kill the bitch haha...whatever, still got some sikk rhymes though...i especially liked this one

"He took a swing at ma black ass//
But, I blocked it, thanks to that judo class//"

lol that one made me laugh...it was good because you added some funny lines in there to lighten up the subject...so imma give it an 7.5 / 10...jus being honest dawg no hate...

peace
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Old 07-03-03, 03:06 AM   #5
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it was tight shit man. Ay get sum more ppl to do collabs wit. If ya need one, holla at me.
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Old 07-03-03, 05:37 AM   #6
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Yo! We need some more feedback here!
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Old 07-03-03, 06:18 AM   #7
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FEEDBACK DAWGZ!!!
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Old 07-03-03, 06:24 AM   #8
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Aight here's some feedback. First of all I doubt anyone here is a REAL gansta no one is bustin' caps in otha people. We got some dope freestylists on this site but just cause they can rhyme doesn't mean they have to live in the ghetto and kill people. You people act like you gotta do that shit to be a good rapper but that isn't true. And for your song Gansta it started out okay, I wasn't too crazy about the overall lyrics but the flow was good in the first and third verse. The second verse was a lil choppy, but overall not too bad.
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Old 07-03-03, 07:58 AM   #9
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it lacked a lil but had potential and it was complimentary with vocab just not structure wich is alos where i lack never the less i like
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