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Old 06-05-03, 07:03 PM   #1
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Some Sympathy For The Devil...
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Old 06-05-03, 09:13 PM   #2
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I Only Hear Your Vocals Comming From One Speaker..

Flow Is On And On ..

Content Is Nice..

Work On More Emotion And Upping The Flow A Bit .
And It Would Be A Pretty Nice Track.
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Old 06-06-03, 12:35 AM   #3
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I thought you'd sound like a wigga, but you actually sound like one of those smart kids. Great drop, take that shit to a studio fo sho. Go peep my audio, I finally got it to work!
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Old 06-06-03, 04:41 AM   #4
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thx up...
will do tomorrow
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Old 06-06-03, 07:12 AM   #5
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nice job man,i liked it you were right about how you could get it goin the entire beat,nice job.take away bugs thatbite...lmao.yeha those things piss me off.if you can get your hands on a sounf reducer or somehting of the like for your mic,it would stop the fuzz effect coming out of it nahmean,but yeha it did go ith the beat like you said,but its difficult getting ultra audio quality on the computer no doubt,maybe ask salvation his shits all on the computers.open a wing shop,if only pigs knew...lmao..nice drop man,like jay said your voice only comes out on my left headphone/speaker.and the right is picking up all the muffles and breathes of it nahmean,equalizer should do the trick though .nice drop man,liked how you reqorded the personal to take 3rd wheels out the picture,i think thats the right part...yeah you didnt sound liek i thought you would...lmao,but i mean,i thought peopel spoke spanish in new mexico lmao...
oh well,good works.needs tweakin but what doesnt.

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Old 06-06-03, 10:12 AM   #6
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Wow. That was pretty good. Of course the lyrics were off the hook, as usual.

"Let Intelligence Pay Student Loans" - Awesome, Wow

"Put Softness In Callous Keep Eva With Alex" - HaHa, Awww

"I'd Cash In A Life In Heaven, For You To Pay Earth One Visit." - Thats was serious, nice.

Your quality was fairly good, which surprised me.
Your flow was also good, again surprising me.
Overall you did a really really good job for your first audio.
It doesn't even sound like it is your first, (thats a major compliment, LoL)

Well man, I definitely wasn't disappointed, definitely not. Once I get my computer back, and I'm able to download it, its going to be on a CD, that’s truth.
And I can't wait to hear more.
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Old 06-06-03, 07:37 PM   #7
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werd ^ . i don't know
what is up with that
fuzz. it sounds nothing
like that in the file
on my comp...hmm...
thank you ... up?
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Old 06-07-03, 03:17 AM   #8
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hay yo......

your lyrics are fuckin tight......

but slug raper check it......

put some emotion in to it....

and itlll will be ten times better

na mean...........

and why do you like slug so much.......

he is tight.... but im just curious.....
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Old 06-07-03, 03:43 AM   #9
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well well well... what can i say
that no body else has already
i liked it alot i am very proud of
you for making your first audio
like i told youbefore my eyes
literally teared
anyway
it was awesome i didnt really pay
any attention to the "noize"
but i really liked the way it started
all the why to the way it ended
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Old 06-16-03, 10:41 PM   #10
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Old 06-19-03, 06:05 AM   #11
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this was fuckin ace!
good flow which u got in2 as the piece grew on
intelligent shit, nice voice that sustains interest
and good lyrics
superb beat by yo man Nip!!!!!!!!

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Old 06-20-03, 08:26 PM   #12
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word up....

NIP is the DOPEST!
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Old 06-21-03, 12:37 AM   #13
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Show more emotion in your rhymes and work on your voice I'm just not feelin it in your lyrics. Maybe its cause that was a little too R&B and don't like R&B but work on it and you'll improve.
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Old 06-21-03, 04:17 AM   #14
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Yo man that was some ill poetry...but i cant classify that as rap dude..... put more emotion into what u spittin on the mic......the lyrics were ill but u need some mic presence dawg keep it up though
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Old 06-22-03, 03:45 AM   #15
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lol, no
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