a pale reflection absorbed in the mirror as alex gazed
tears bounced off happiness as the contrast hit his face
almost like night and day, lonely as ever, no eva to talk to
no getaway to walk to, left with those feelings so awful
your body comes off you, and your soul is naked and runs
to a place by itself, with nothing at all to ever come to love

if you love it leave it, a statement of ingenious, believe it
has my life fucked worse than a the tip of a pimps penis
it's got me screamin' out desires i never wanted to live
gasping for breath in this ocean, never learning to swim
no where to go but down, the sad clown has lost all hope
he's falling down below the ground, and no one even knows
not that they would care if they did, they didn't notice he lived
the girl he loved cheated on him, and threw back his rib
i feel like i'm floating, but i'm dead up top a body of water
the body is mine, i'm dead inside, so my soul just wanders
he gets lost in this world, like a baby no one to teach him
or hold his hand, and take him to heaven, where dreams live
leaves give, the air a purpose and softly dissolve the hurtin'
and my sunshine is inside me, just blocked by curtains
the real me is here, it just doesn't come out, i'm certain
someday you may see it, and i pray you might forgive
but it's all said and done, happiness is fed in crumbs
at least to me, the low life will soon lay dead in slums
of suburban love, never to awake again, or open his eyes
never experience content, or have to witness demise
not living to die, he's dying to live, the quote was like i said..

ingenious....

this isn't about a girl, i used to love life, now i have to leave it

goodbye...

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This Was A Really Dope Deep Drop Man...
I'm Going To Sticky It For You..
It Deserves It...

And I Hope This Isn't Serious, Cuz We'd Be Losing An Amazing Writer, And I , A Friend...

-Sureal

Pretty well written..

flow was pretty nice

content was dope..

overall nice peice.

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` Nuff Said.

alright..first off....love the avy...its sooo cute....hehe

damn...we were just talkin bout how fucked up life is but for some reason u just gotta hold on ya know....

like i said in ur guestbook...we only live once .... and we have to cherish each and every moment of it...either bad or good...sometimes bad can be good and good can be bad...if that makes any sense...

well i really liked this piece...very unique approach..i felt it from the beginning to the end....

i loved it....

dont forget...if u need someone to talk to...im here...ill listen

well aight...madd good ish..

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- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

this was dope dude....I really can't add much more to it.
great emotion...sad clown....atmosphere song, no? Made me think of it.
Beautiful diction. Tip of a Pimp's Penis lol....amazing piece
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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

I like this shit...it was deep indeed...I might have to bite it...just fuckin' wit' cha...the Prolifik 1 don't bite...holla

*crowns this as a museum piece.*

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this was deep as hell, nice i liked this very much

if you love it leave it, a statement of ingenious, believe it
has my life fucked worse than a the tip of a pimps penis
^^crazy right there

u put alot of emotion in this and i enjoyed reading it
looking forward to ya next drop

lmao@*crowns this as a museum piece.*

you're gonna kill yourself? no you aint.

the piece was original, imagery was strong. thats the strengths of it.