Comin from the streets along the wansbeck – greets ya –
By the bank of the river on the right side where it meets at
Where the up and comin smokers started smokin, new found habit-at ,
Introducing drugs, bongin weed and started fuckin twat
More than that - drug-introduction acid speed, and all of dat –
Stemming off the one and only special friend the potent plant
Wandering up and down eyes blood shot red, wrecked gallivant,
Back and forth, up and down, patrolling with high chant
-High as me - the public passing - no contactin - avoidin we,
Acting like were Nazis or the new hooded up enemy?
Some hate drugs, T total never drink a pint - one two or three,
But not me-I feel free-enjoy a slightly more dangerous scene
Don’t ask why - cos that’s just the way us smoker be
The new generation congregating down the river you will see,
15 year old, like looking in the mirror, going back 10 years to 1993



this is the first verse, ill post the rest when its complete justed wanted some feedback first...aight

not too bad man, decent read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece i thought, your content was good too, your vocab was pretty good i thought as well, overall good piece, keep dropping.

If you could return the feedback..
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thanx, be sure to check the rest when i post it.......................

peace!!!!!!!

bout to check yours......aight

Flowed well,was feelin tha content coz i know what ur talkin about trus me,good vocab and one or two multies i picked up,jus waitin on the rest,but good stuff.

Peace