I battled this guy, MoRbId, yesterday and I don't know why I lost. Can someone tell me what's wrong with my verse? And how his verse came up with the win? Here... mine's the first one and his is the second. Was my shit too basic or I lost because I spit first. Uppin for some feedback.

MoRbId, you sound like a poor kid
I should send your fuckin ass back to abortion
before I rip you up into tiny little portions
and grill you up so your momma could eat you up like horse shit
My rhymes are so raw once I spit them in your mouth it'll taste like medicine
giving your skin a 2nd degree burn to disintegrate your skeleton
like a Salmonella virus leering your organs and meltin 'em
just like how I fucked up each of your relatives
You look scared as fuck as if I threatened you like I'd beat your ass down in Maine
You can't relate to my shit, and have no one to blame
cuz when I win this battle you'll be doing the "Walk of Shame"
Fuck it, I already know your gonna choke before you say what you say
So spit motherfucker, so I could be the victor of this game
-MC-Viet

Just some advice MC-Viet join a label. ‘Cas you’ll just get fired,//
You suck like your retired, wait…fuck retired,//
Your fuckin’ retarded! Just because you started.//
And know wut? Your shit stinks! At first I thought someone farted.//
Me battlin you has no point, like a broken pencil.//
Battlin fags like you who spit weak shit is so un-suspenseful.//
And you’re only a stupid kid,//
Trying to get high of the dope that I already did.//
U know it’s me that you can’t beat,//
The only way u could win against me is if you cheat.//
And u better go give a vote for yourself hun,//
‘Cas that’s the ONLY way u could possibly get one!//
Now, all I have left say is, “I want you to fuck me bitch!” //
Yeah, just so I can give u AIDS, herpes, and make ur dick itch…//
-MoRbId