I waz a bit bored so I made up a quick rhyme:

yo I'm not (only) in fo money, it might sound funny, but I want respect//
yo when I sit in my room lonely writin a rhyme, takin the time, I need respect//
if u would give a fuck about me and say that my shit is ill, is that respect?//
if you ride my cock and buy me a glock and don't say that I suck, is THAT respect?//
owww, gimme respect, all I need in this world, owwwww respect, I want respect//
gimme respect, owwwww, I just want some respect,but am I worth it (respect)//
do you feel this, tell me do you really feel my shit, just tell me, cuz... (respect)//

yeah,yo
all I want, respect don't let me down, shorty//
yo think all rappers are on money? not fo me//
I'm in fo respect, nothin else you hear me G//
respect that's what I need right now dawg//
respect that's what I want right now, but fuck//
all you people do is hate me, try to rape me//
yeah, I mean lyrical, ya only wanna kill me, well feel free//
fuck life, fuck this fuck myself, fuck this world B//
I don't care I'm suicidal, it ain't yo problem is it//
it ain't your fucking problem that I'm in deep shit//
fuck all I want is respect, thats what I said//
when I rap and it''s whack I still want respect//
when I fuck without a condom I still want respect//
I know this freestyle, I know I want respect//
respect bitch, respect yeah gimme respect//
I can’t think about dollars when I rap (respect)//
I don’t think about bitches when I rap (respect)//
I won’t think about bling when I rap (respect)//
Uh-huh yeah respect y’all, respect,respect,respect

yo I'm not (only) in fo money, it might sound funny, but I want respect//
yo when I sit in my room lonely writin a rhyme, takin the time, I need respect//
if u would give a fuck about me and say that my shit is ill, is that respect?//
if you ride my cock and buy me a glock and don't say that I suck, is THAT respect?//
owww, gimme respect, all I need in this world, owwwww respect, I want respect//
gimme respect, owwwww, I just want some respect,but am I worth it (respect)//
do you feel this, tell me do you really feel my shit, just tell me, cuz... (respect)//

yo when I wrote this I thought I wouldn’t get respect//
but I don’t care, I only rap fo maself (respect)//
r.e.s.p.e.c.t. RESPECT BITCH, thats what life’s about//
respect’s a big word, In the north,west,east and south//
respect’s what I expect when I start rappin fo a croud//
no respect, no life, no life, no wife, no wife, no alkohol//
everything depends on something else,so u need respect if u want all//
all of the things you can dream about,even a whole mall//
well, thats a bit exaggerated but it’s cool to be rich, y’all//
well, I think so,I don’t know, cuz I’m not fuckin rich at all//
but still I want respect, yeah respect haha, respect...
for the last time:

yo I'm not (only) in fo money, it might sound funny, but I want respect//
yo when I sit in my room lonely writin a rhyme, takin the time, I need respect//
if u would give a fuck about me and say that my shit is ill, is that respect?//
if you ride my cock and buy me a glock and don't say that I suck, is THAT respect?//
owww, gimme respect, all I need in this world, owwwww respect, I want respect//
gimme respect, owwwww, I just want some respect,but am I worth it (respect)//
do you feel this, tell me do you really feel my shit, just tell me, cuz... (respect)//

If you took sum time on it you could make a preety good track wit it. Keep spittin dawg.

thanx

uppin

This was aiight... nothing great. Didn't flow that well to me... it might just be the way I read it though...

should I put the long version (if u open this by clickin just rhyme you get the short version, i u posted or click go to the last unread post you'll get the full/long version) on my demo (when I set it up on audio)?

uppin

Descent shit right here,yo jus a suggestion but vary up ur endins so they don't end with tha same letter or sylibal for any more than three lines coz when it does change it sometimes can seem forced.But yo jus a suggestion dawg.

thanx fo the suggestion dawg...

uppin

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W A K E U P!!!
uppin...

GREAT POTENTIAL AND IDEAS NEED TO WORK ON THIS A LIL BUT WAS VERY GOOD

very nice, we should collab 1 time, like word said u got nice ideas with cleverly used word-play....

holla in pm if u wanna do a text collab.....

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