20 lines max
you go first

yo i thought it was 10 lines dawg, imma juss spit 10 come back wit 10-15 iight............................................. .................................................. ..............

iight thanx man





they call me a verbal rapist, nobody can escape this,
you kats look at me wrong, im leavin yall faceless,//

i come at bitches wid a death kiss, and hit niggas wit a death wish,
you lil nit wit, get fit, before you try to start ya shit,
your boyz aint got ya back against me, they dont wanna be a part of it,///

yo this kid's goin to outer space, im a newbie, and i put this kid in his place,
im tearin this kid he's a disgrace, im like a cat, he's a mouse, gettin chased,//

did you really think you could take me, you aint even fit to beat my meat,
but dont worry, cuz your chest is about to meet my piece,
cuz my verse is like a oven tha way it brings tha Heat....
your beat, so sit back in ya seat, cuz im stompin this kat, wit steel toed cleats,
your verse was limp like a bizkit, and about as soft as dog treats,/////

is this nigga dumb, nah he's just stupid, 10-15 not twenty two bitch,
even tho they was all shit, you sparked tha beef now i got your lighter lit,//

death is comin quickly, these weak punches don't hit me,
my verse is turnin down dirty and gritty, like ya girlz pussy, this beef smellz shitty,//

iight dawg, no you asked for a beatin, so im leavin this kid dead, bloody and beaten,
he looks at my verse and starts repetin, but im a dallinquent, your verse aint shit,
you fifteen mins in fame have just cane sweetly sent, so it's time to repent,///


iight that's better.


NEXT

ozones words expelled to have this wack cat burn in hell
Before you start droppin lyrics, you should learn to spell
You'll flail in my flaunting with all your failures i'm daunting
You a jackass, an my 9's playin pin the tail on the donkey
I'm tired of remindin you, I generated your tight diction
So you nothin but a second rate imitation of my spittin
I'll leave you charred, An i'm a hit you so hard the stars you see will be seein stars
I'm rippin' with techs aimed, you bedridden with red stains
While I'm incineratin mic receivers quicker than jet flames
You'll be floatin' in hell when you get soaked in the swell
Cause I'm so dope I'll make angel dust overdose on itself
When I roast a line an steadily begin to unload the nine
For you it's sudden death, like hockey games in overtime
I play cold , and spray flows, shank domes of lame hoes
Break bones an beat you to death with your gravestone
ozone splits your genes with fists to teeth when spittin clean
Hit you so hard your respiratory system forgets to breathe
Slew insides too, put where no rescue crew will find you
Or freeze you an sell off your pieces as human ice cubes
Get to bailin dude, not to be rude but i'm a newbie to
and you just got chewed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62812 yo vote no show on this battle and I'll hit this back

ozone blew you away man!!!!

I vote ozone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can you vote on me and dw please anyone??????

iight first off neither of us can vote yet, second off, there are no such thing as noshow votes, third off why tha fuck you freepostin in my thread, i ought to smack the shit outta you just for bein a fuckin retard.............

yo i said 10-15 lines, if i got your permission can i put a few more lines into it, i mean that is the only fair thing,............................................ .................................................. .................if so tell me.

do what you gotta do man..if you wanna add more too it you can, but just remember you went first i said 20 line max..althoughj i may have gone over it..but hey i am cool with whatever..i am just practicin anyway

thanx i edited it much respect dawg, uppin for some votez............................................. .................................................. ..................

lets get some votes in guys.............................................. .................................................. ...............................

dam ozone slow down homie, tight verse my nigga
deez niggaz think just because we newbies we cant spit
let dem niggas know, verbal your shit was tight too, but my vote goes to ozone on this one playa
good luck to both
holla

punches =ozone
flow=both
metas=ozone
vote=ozone

pretty much ozone came harder

da nigga is lookin 4 a win and da kid earned it

off da hook punches

both yall had nice flow but yall gotta work on ur structure

vote=ozone

thanx for tha crit, yo when you vote break it down line by line and give crit. so i kno what to work on,,,............................................. ....................