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07-06-03, 01:26 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Diary (Ja Rule and 50 Cent Diss)
IP: FEAD FB22
I'm Insane like Saddam and sicker than Chemical Ali/
Make ya see black stars like my name is Kweli/ Karate Chop like this Flair vs Steamboat/ Have ya ass bloody leanin against the ropes/ Now we got to niggaz beefin, one screamin murda!/ The second one I knew about before he was heard of/ Both ridin legends dicks to make some sales/ If ya'll was hard, ya'll be too busy tryna make bail/ Lets start off wit Ja, he sound like the Grinch singin lullabys/ You ain't make shit off ya last CD, you got no aliby/ Scared of ya own race now, face it you finished/ Any credibility you had already diminished/ Your company is a corporation that murdered your career/ That's why you went from CMC, to a Pac bitin queer/ I'll write some jams for bitches, but that can't be my whole sound/ Cause i'm not tryna look like some rappin RnB clown/ Now i'm done wit this fool, just made him look silly/ Go prance ya gay ass all over Queens like you Diddy/ *Chorus*(Slightly taken from Montana Diary) It's that bitch nigga shit/ The Money and the Politics/ Son recognize, real rap I need a lot of it/ One day you'll honor it/ Till then this game's a lie to me/ Need to take a look inside the T-nice diary/ Next up, the nigga that named himself after 2 quarters/ He used to be sick enough to bust both the Bush daughters/ Went industry now and forgot about the underground/ You was nice now you no longer lyrically sound/ Em says you a good rapper, he really is a good actor/ But don't matter, you fallin victim to my X-Factor/ Now you sweat Hova tryna sell shoes?/ I better calm down before I give you a verbal bruise/ Oh wait, wasn't it you that made Jackin for Jay-Z?/ And the reason I hated Jigga more was cause that track made me?/ Face it, you worthless, you wack/ Go home bitch, your a loser and you can't rap/ A walking piece of scum on the face of the Earth/ Bitch, you wasn't shit since the day of your birth/ You crackchild, burn slow like a black n Mild/ But be calm Kurt, I know these words was kinda vile/ It's just a wake up call....wait do you even know what vile means?/ You dumb ass bitch, got kicked outta school in ya late teens/ For a loaded up gun, bet it was a 22/ Soft bitch, only real niggaz can see through you/ So where them guns at? I heard you had many/ More than the men that's gon be wishin death upon me/ Oh wait, they just plastic cap guns/ Think a fake Smif n Wesson gon make me run?/ Got a fake Vietnam toy from ya boy, AK-47/ Fuck wit me, i'll have you better aquainted wit heaven/ Damn son, I ripped you pretty bad/ Let me even this out, Ja a bitch made mafuckin fag/ Hope you enjoyed, I know I did/ So don't make me pop ya top like a soda lid... Chorus(6X till fade) i dunno why i did this so don't ask i was juss madd bored |
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07-06-03, 01:37 PM | #2 | |||||||
BANNED for biting
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IP: B38F 7A05
LmaO , Why u're dissing two cats who will never diss u back , And i hate when u cats diss Rappers , thats whack man , Anyways ur Punches were WEAK , U gotta elevate on that , U didnt have much vocab in this Piece , Ur Wordplay was Aight , but could have been better.......
I'm Insane like Saddam and sicker than Chemical Ali/ Make ya see black stars like my name is Kweli/ ^^^That was Tight But lines like this Damn son, I ripped you pretty bad/ Let me even this out, Ja a bitch made mafuckin fag/ ^^^^^That Was WEAK Tha Chorus was Tight , I was feelin it...... Overall u get a 6/10..... |
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07-06-03, 03:34 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: FEAD FB22
iight dawg thanx, uppin for more feedbak
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07-06-03, 03:51 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: A10D 4933
closed is my only feedback.
don't diss people who you don't even know. bish..
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