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Old 07-07-03, 12:01 AM   #1
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This is going to be an AUDIO track

IP: 4577 CD9A

yeah this is my first completed track on my upcoming albumon 25 to Life Records...its a bad text track but i would like ffedback as to what you think of it as an AUDIO TRACK

[sound effect: OOOOH!]

[Talking: Ah man, you done fucked up now...asking me who I am...listen close now...]


[hook]
A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say It one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time/
Im A2Z, coming back to take whats mine
[repeat]

[Verse 1}
Have you ever looked into the eyes of someone rising to the top//
Who wont stop flowing, whether it be triple platinum or flop//
A rapper a whos never even seen a droptop but lives for hip hop//
With a drive that even a semi with a jet engine can't stop//[honk]
Cuz Im a guilty verdict in hiding, fucking 25 to life//
The kid that's snatches ya wife and gives her a C-Section with a steak knife//
I got your pressure on my shoulder, collapsing my neck//
but this is a lesson you'll never forget//[gun cock, laugh and gun shots]
That's four in ya chest and six off ya vest//
That's ten from my tech, not counting the three in ya neck//
That's 13, which means that this obscene teen//
Just crushed ya dreams for a publicity scheme//[cameras snapping]
Sticking a bomb between ya seats and watching ya car careen//[screech]
Cuz A2Z is here…a white boy sent to change the game//
Ive come to claim the fame and show the beast that ive became//
The critically acclaimed rapper who puts black MCs to shame//
Im the white boy on top…I know you know it…come on and tell me whats my name?//

[hook]
A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say It one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time/
Im A2Z, coming back to take whats mine
[repeat]

[Verse 2]
Parents right about now are hiding kids from the beats A2Z is//
Cuz im spitting satanic shit and kicking up turbulence//
Telling kids violent crimes to commit and say Fuck their parents//
Getting kids to strap explosives to their chest and becoming terrorists//[explosion]
A brain washer, a moon walker, helping mike Jackson rape some kids// [Jackons: Hehe]
Oh…shit now I got adults pissed and got them screaming for censorship//
With parental advisory stickers everywhere except my dick//
My words make people cry…but the sadness makes me feel great//
Cuz I can teach hate with the slurred words that I create//
But I cant wait to see you wound up like I beat you with a mixtape//[Ahh!]
Producing shit out of a basement…the true meaning of underground//
The best around, with a sound that world renowned//
A lyrical killer, leaving herbs lost and never found//
Stop acting like I didn't earn it…this shit didn't come for free//
But 11 out of ten times thru diving signs even god would choose me//[Holy sound]
So you can sue me, or get on running like first graders form cooties//
Ill even send you a mail bomb you can tell ya fags friends you blew me//[Explosion]
You cant beat me, you better off just admitting im the king//
These guys think there making my ears ring with the slurs that they scream//
I just laugh, in fact it don't even sting//
The only purpose it seems is to up my self esteem//
Cuz this constant anger theme just tells me I rain supreme//
Fuck, u cant see me in a needle in a haystack//
even if your innocent i'll cut you in half and call it payback//
kickin ya round since egyptian times an way-back.//
Go ahead call it a bitch slap…this is an herb attack//

[hook]
A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say It one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time/
Im A2Z, coming back to take whats mine
[repeat]

[Verse 3]
My eyes are fucking sore, I wanna go to sleep//
But something burns inside of me… something down deep//
Something that's keep saying "Fuck it Z, write it."//
But I can't catch the words like a catcher without a mitt//
So I sit here, stare at my pad, thumb in my ass//
And I just start to cry… mentally bomb myself with tear gas//
But then it fucking hits me… I start to hear the flow//
I yank out my pain, start to write, and let all my stress go//
Cuz what you fools don't realize is that this is my escape//
It takes a foolish white boy-it's a fucking change of shape//
It can take a boy that no one respects and make it can make him great
Ya feel that tingling in ya stomach…its called a Z buzz//
This kid of buzz aint illegal, it don't cost big bucks//
You can't get arrested cuz it don't require drugs//
Smoking a plant can't do it…only my flows does//
Cuz I rip with the best of em…got birches on they knees//
But not to give me a blowjob, its ecause they worship me//
The few that view the plain to see skill that flows in A2Z//

[hook]
A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say It one more time//
Im A2Z- Who am I? Say it one more time/
Im A2Z, coming back to take whats mine
[repeat x 3]

[Talking:] Ha…now you fucking know…A2Z don't forget that name….im the white one with the blue eyes and still rapping with that best…hah…


remember its an AUDIO TRACK
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Old 07-07-03, 12:50 AM   #2
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yo man firstly i didnt wanna read past tha first verse cuz it was boring. However i did like the first two lines capivating but like i said the rest of the first verse discouraged me from reading tha rest, sorry man.
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Old 07-07-03, 01:04 AM   #3
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aight thanx for the honest feedback
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