I think I'm good and so do alot of other people but I'm getting my ass whipped left and right, go check out the front lines and look at my battles, can you please tell me whats wrong and how to fix it? thanks...

u suck dick i will kill u any day of the fuckin week u lucky i got dqed fo freepostin when i really didnt i want to battle u again with the same verse we both spit

^^^^^^^Thats freeposting again.

Your problem is your flow sucks. Stop trying to rhyme like three words a line and start rhyming the last word of every rhyme. After you get better at the take a look at this.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60755

you are kinda wak...
i agree wit peyo-dont get ahead of urself...take ur game at small steps....ull eventually elevate....dont try an be dre ova night...it dont happen young fella

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