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wordplay/vocab lover's peep
IP: 7B1B B8FB
yo its the elusive lyrically reklusive flow-killa
grab the mic with an abusive skill so call me flow-zilla regression of y on x with tha most complex projects grabbin the mic for my nigga wrex im tha annex between decks ill drop more mutli vocab then you've ever seen in existance den i will show you how we drop the presistance improtant like national aeronautics and space administration spittin radiation,non stop infiltration, with personification niggas in tha wrong like misinterpretation while im more known than a god manifestation this talkin procrastination going around organization pisses me off cuz the interpretation situtation use your fuckin imagination to hear my infatuation with lyrical thoughts produced threw hallucination i dont even receve a congratulation for half my collaboration i still drop bombs to shake half the nation threw determination total annihilation fuckit post this in the hall of fame situation ill give you my deepest appreciation, hold on im administration ill do it myself with no hesitation or discrimination cuz any 1 who gets in this will be known threw out creation i have mad anticipation, for feed back on this presentation told me to drop vocab so imma show you a transformation a main reason why im on top of all rappers on earth's plantation can't wait to be rich off this shyt so i can start relaxation population aint even an obligation for my revelation my lyrical levitation keeps elevation of rhyme navigation got an obligation to keep my occupation threw meditation give me an invitation to a collab and ill show inspiration innovation keeps my shyt tight even in reclusive isolation i got 1 explanation its call education whats your expectation? i filled out an appliaction for a rap destination tha desperation had a combination of tears and concentration over skilled almost how i still keep an conversation lets keep this shyt in formation as i drop some information about rap vocations that send sensation to a different location of salvation even threw frustration...FUCK IT I NEED A VACATION |
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Sup
IP: 4577 CD9A
Nice flow, Multis were banging wordplay was nice also, im feelin ya post keep droppin 1
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
thanx 4 tha feed back nigga....................uppin
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IP: 7ECC C64B
aiight...this shit was coo...liked the flow and vocab was up high...but your internals seemed forced...really bad at times...jus my opinion...1~peace
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
^^^iight thanx ill try to work on this
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
uppin
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IP: F595 20FD
yea was iight piece, felt it ok, but some shit was forced, if ya can tone that down this would be very tight.
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
iight thanx 4 tha help ^^^^ thumbs up
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
uppin
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