these fuckin' females seem ta like playin' mind games
as I try-ta contemplate these nine states of migranes
my mind frame slips and an irate state kicks in
I'm sicken'd by the way she's try'n-a change the person I am
like convertin' a lamb strayed from a flock, I stay on my walk
stand my ground and say I'm not soft,
I want you with all my heart but since the start we were doomed
lust took hold and temptation consumed,
now all we're left with is this fuck friend epidemic
both against it the only option I guess is to end it...

HOOK X2
It's over....
bitch you know it..
no more gurl..
I'm sick-a bullshit...

how can I focus on a pussy dick relationship
why keep retainin' it, when I want more than what we make of it
my patience is 'bout to top tha scale of 1 ta 10,
10 bein' tha highest, 11 we no-longer even friends
so if you wan-a sever any kind of descency before it ends
just take tha blow and let the wounds an' pain jus' mend
then when you feel up to goin' out ta chill I will no questions asked but still
you gotta realize that this is real life, it's over with, we're through
just know I know you love me, but girl I don't love you.

HOOK X2

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to the point, the vocab is in need of uppin, the hook was basic as hell. a little more imagry wouldve brought this to life.

man, it was happening while I was writing it, didn't have time to think of crazy vocab... like honestly 5 min's ago this was goin on, my girl is all pissed, and so am I ... I'm pro'lly dumping her within the next 10... so sorry 'bout the quality of this piece, I was just gettin' shit off my chest..

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its coo u gettin of ur chest n well dun fo expressin, but u could go over it again coz it woz kinda flat but u kept to tha topic. keep it up
peace~roX~

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im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas

meh.... I don't plan on usin' this shit... it was a keystyle... which basically means garbage...

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