theres only a couple songs on my page anyways... so if u can take tha time to listen to some and gimme some feedback on em... that would be great

when u givin feedback juss name tha song u feelin the song u not feelin... why u feelin why u not... ya know wut to do... im out

peace

You Know Who:.... not feelin' tha beat.. not feelin' your flow at all, your too quiet or you slur, either way it sounded like crap..

on to the next...

Sick Mutha-Fucka:... needs more emotion, lyrics are kinda elementary, no real word play or meta's... I like tha beat.. hook was wack.. sorry yo, this one's not to good either, you need to seriously work on your emphasys..

next....

My Fantasy:.... mmmmmm, I want some blunt.. this one's a little better, lyrically it still needs wordplay and shit, but it flows better and your emotion's better.. this beat's safe.. ne-way.. that's all I'm-a listen to .. peace..

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thanx for tha feedback

listening to sick mother fucker..

hook is weak.. flow is off so bad..mostly off beat.. voice could be better if ya felt it out more.. it was koo in the intro.. just really put feeling into it.. feel ur lyrics.. move your body to your words and always try to bring it across in the voice... did better in second verse..

but work on flow..

quality aint too bad..

one

peep my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62772

iight thanx for feedback

uppin

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anymore feedback ?

flow is abit off..elaborate ur metaphors more to fill in the gap...beat is shit..hook is OK..quality isnt good

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