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no crew, hate, dick ryde votes
First to 5 votes wins. 5-0 is a merk


Checkin before spittin

This is my check in.
Good luck
spit as soon as you can and I'll do the same thing

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Beginning


I bought a Franchise from Mcdonalds last year//
It comlpetely failed cause you were there and people didn't to eat with a queer//
I'll show you what 'raps about' ya need to know cause ya verses are 'crap no doubt'//
When ya lost ya started to 'clap and shout', ya were cryin when ya got home so they 'trapped ya out'//


Building Up


Ya couldn't spit something hot if ya saliva was boiling//
Ya mouth is completely Iced out and it ain't platinum, its made for foiling//*
Ya goal in life simply to get his wang mouthifed and later get laid//
But I 'bet pay' is the 'only way' for you to 'get laid' or mouthified or even a date//


Finisher


Don't be upset if ya team don't make the playoffs//
Why are ya in the unemployment line? Rappin don't make layoffs//

iight i got spit against dean then i'll hit dis up holla............................................. ............................................

come on dawg spit already, you spit against dean like and hour ago. ya better not be pre-writin yo shit dawg

When people battle you they think heaven-be-gins/
every one no's you're "nice" cuz ya "gave out 7 -wins"/
ya lyrics are "poor" I can tell u you aint got no "funds"/
Damn your a herb, i no ya broke but even ya "avatar" can't "afford real guns"/
Ha, this kid thinks he's great but da statments he makes are hanus/
u still wouldn't "spit hot shit" if ya "reguritated" from eatin a fat man "flammin anus"/
so don't wait please tell dis kid battlin me is a mistake/
nigga please pushin ya mom's "wheel chair" is da only time ya "push weight"/
dawg if ya look at ya record it would tell ya text stlye is old/
don't think ya HARD cuz u wrote some words are bold/

hmmm.... Dawg why waz u rushin me a had stuff to do like work
da kid some time and i'll always come through. solid verse tho
gotta admit u've really elevated....

Pretty easily taken by Franchise...

Better flow, wordplay and harder punches.

Peyo kinda seemed like he was repeatin himself here and there.

Killed things for me.

Holla back...
Born to Kill vs. Ozone

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ayo i gotta give this to my man peyo he had better punch lines and overall better everything vote to peyo holla me back and return da fava at this link


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63107

Good battle but i htink franchise go this one

he had better stuff, flows, punches etc...
good verse though peyo

vote - Franchise

hit this up with a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62699
dont exactly kno what gonna happen cause he is banned

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uppin for votes I'll return the favor even if you don't vote for me

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flo-fran
word play-fran
multi-none
mechanics-both
enjoyment-fran

final verdict-franchise..dropped dis kat pretty easily...pretty funny

return the favor wit an honest vote here..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63985