" Modern War"

Word~Perfect featuring Thug Whyte
collaboration shit...

verse 1.. (word~perfect)

we the AXIS and the ALIES starting WORLD WAR 2-
eat my WORDS and become THE ODEYSSEY and ICLUID-
as an artist i paint the ART OF WAR with your coarpses then decorate-
to elaborate- the teachens of SUN TZU-
erradicate- cause GLOABL WARMING with NAPALM-
reading the world they LAST RIGHTS usen PSALMS-
on the tribes of ISLAM-
translate-ARROEMAIK-
and use GODS (LANGUAGE) to take my anguish-
on the land of tirany-the city-of liberty-
abolished with the VATICAN vanquished-
destroy the mentality- of impurity-
HOLY WAR ~play lord and GODAMNIT-
the planet-
recreat NOAH'S ARCH- with blood of the severed hearts-
of the enemies with the concious of NAPOLEAN BONAPART-
understand the 3's- (WWW.) com,illuminatti's 3 decades of government funding- and H.I.V-


verse 2.. (Thug Whyte)

Verbals kill wit herbal pills.. MAN-MADE Disease was a preverbial steal//
Givin me cheap thrillz, like signin rights of BILLS.. on bunkered HILLS.. water-logged like diteriating TITANIC window sills//
Injectin MCVEIGH's sentence//
Controversy protection.. BLACK PANTHERS, at a KKK Convention//
13th disciple is really the 12th.. smart people new dis//
And to prove this.. It ended wit 11, tha night Jesus got betrayed by JUDIS//
Dont think BIN LADEN was scared-of-this//
Took 3 years to prepare-for-dis//
He aint a killer.. he ran planes into buildins, thats why they called him a terrorist//
Its fine tha way you saw-this//
runnin into battle.. succeed the dream wit empty wallets like WILLIAM WALLACE//
Gunna be a father .. let him uphold my title like SAUL had DAVID reign his crown//
Makin daddy proud//
Like biblical trumpets,, three JERUSALEMS loud//

verse 3.. (word~perfect)

7 plagues- from mans head-famon and disease-
destruction fathomed with ease-
man makes himself a phantom for greed-
advanse poverty-
to be handsome with greed-
for the power to destroy his enemies-with chemical weaponary-
billets pasted by MUSSOLINI- without the technology- for a remedy-
no antibodie-
so the DNA chain is strained why create clone ENTITY'S?
WAR is in the blood and arteries-
MINORITIES MAJORILY-live in SLAVERY-
we fight in alleys-so we soldiers how many peole you know in the army born in the valley-
grasp the clasp of my rapier-
why war? for the same reason there's seaons ....it's just nature-
represent with a warriors face-
NONCENTZ AND THUGWHYTE see true battle is fought without race.

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Tight shit kidd. Good vocab and wordplay.

still uppin this for feedback

^^^ i agree, this brought a sense of destuction to me fo sum reason. it had good imagery and great construction words to
to make the sentence form. hope to see more from both of yall
~w0n~

not the best I've seen from either of you.. WORD, your first verse honestly sucked, all it had was a huge vocab that really killed the flow... sorry man, you picked up in the second 1 tho 4 sure.. thug whyte had a nice 1st verse with the 13th disciple/ judis shit, and the bin-laden terrorist shit.. I was honestly dissapointed in this.. it was still good but could have been way better... peace

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This was good, but I have seen better from both of you. It definitely seemed like you shot too high with this, but just something didn't click, and it didn't come together as it should have.